(Archive) Advertising District / New Project

Well, I thought it was time to advertise something new from me, seeing as how I have two projects going right now...

Anyway, this is a design called Sleipnir: the Forgotten. It's a sitdown coaster that goes through areas with heavy-ish foliage, and going through delapidated and overgrown buildings.
The theme is pretty much the same as my last park because I really liked how it looked, but I didn't feel like incorporating it into a full-size park (but it probably won't be used by me for a while, after this is done).


As for the screens:
This is a screen of the coaster corkscrewing through some achitecture.



This shows a bit of the coasters station and it's brakerun.



A shot of the back of the Gravitron, and some of the architecture.


The only other flatride, an enterprise. And part of the coaster.


Comments and constuctive criticism always appreciated.

I particularly like that first screen where the coaster bounds out of the foliage steeply up and to the right. The side-friction roof on the 2x2 building is also a nice touch. If that ruined statue piece on top of that building in the center of that screen is supposed to simulate a ruined look, then I might suggest switching up the wall type to light brown castle so it goes better with that square. You also could stick the shorter ruined statue piece in there instead, so it flows more with the roof. In the last screen I might play around with sticking a rapids piece or something similar under the scrambler to simulate water coming out from under. Just something that doesn't make it look so solid, and in such contrast to the water. Also in the second screen, you might want to try bringing the track with the spare train one square closer to the main brake run - it seems to have more of a presence of its own than I think is necessary.

Looks good otherwise. Looking forward to seeing it in action.

this is great! theres not much i CAN critisize on! i love the colors! 10/10 ((WELL, FROM WHAT I CAN SEE WITH THE SCREENIES AT LEAST))

It definitaly has a RRP sort of style going on. The only thing I don't care for, at the moment, is the fact that the buildings seem a little bare. Stack some bushes up against the side, giving it more of an "overcome/distraughted" appearance. The coaster looks awsome, as of yet, in my opinion. Terrific job, so far.

Reminds me of my first tries at RCT. Your area's lack some focus, and buildings which match and suit each other. Also you architecture needs some polishing, try finding a style that suits that area and stick to it. It seems a little too confused. Otherwise, a great effot.

Stargazer

And Also Coolioneodawg2003 please fuck off

Thanks for the comments. I will work on what you guys said, but this is about 70% complete so I don't feel like doing any major changes.

MightyMouse: I never thought of that. It's a great idea.

Panic: I'll look into what you said.

Thanks for the comments from you other two, too.

I really like it. It's got a nice look...maybe a little generic, but you did a good job at least. I like your roof variety...with gables and slopes and flats and using paths and coasters. Shows off your skill and craftiness with the game. Great work!

Wow, I wish I could do that.

Great job.

I love it! That's really a style for LL that I prefer over that like Posix's. I especially love that first screen...cool interacting elements. I can tell you've made a point to add diversity, and that's always good. Keep it up.

Well, it's nice enough, and coaster looks pretty cool, but there's something about it that's just so "meh". The colors are boring, the architecture is sorta unfocused, and it seems so generic, which makes nothing too intristing about it.

SirSpinster, rctman, Coasterforce - Thank you for the comments. I appreciate them.

yyo - That's what i was thinking. I started this park about right after I lost my last project, I started this. Then i took a break from it for about 2 months, and just started to rebuild it. I have gotten a lot better.

Really liking that actually.

Don't change anything.

i love it!!! awsome work

You know, that train is about to fall off the track. It's the little details that count, you can't just be careless like that and say "whatever it's done." I can't really judge the ride because I haven't seen it all so I don't see the point. The colors look pretty standard and boring, and brown. You're going to have to add other details/colors to draw your eyes away from the walls themselves which just seems depressing.

Yeah, I am going to release this unfinished. Because I have found that I no longer enjoy working on this, and my style has evolved imo, and it's too 2x2-ish.

EDIT: Nevermind, I got it.
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