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  • VC15SA%s's Photo
    Yeah, the station does look pretty good. Although I'm not feeling the swampy theme. At least not from this screen.
  • OhioCoasteRFreaK36%s's Photo
    Swamp theme is no more, more like...earth..yeah I said that in my post didn't I? Nope guess I didn't yeah it isnt swamp anymore, the sign into the zone says welcome to earth :lol:
  • Turtle%s's Photo
    That's exactly what i meant! Nice one...

    Take the bush fences off the rocks at the top, leave them blank. Hooray for using the classy flowers, but take them off the landscape, and just have them bordering the path. I think that would make the natural look flow a bit better.

    That foliage is superb.
  • OhioCoasteRFreaK36%s's Photo
    Thanks Turtle! I will take out the hedges on the top of it.

    Keep with the comments I like the tips :)
  • OhioCoasteRFreaK36%s's Photo
    Dreamcatcher:
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    Enjoy!
  • cg?%s's Photo
    I, actually, like this. It's more colorful (both literally, and figuratively), with better use of landscaping, than most anything being built at the moment. Very nice.
  • JBruckner%s's Photo

    I, actually, like this. It's more colorful (both literally, and figuratively), with better use of landscaping, than most anything being built at the moment. Very nice.

    Don't say actually, it demeans your comment.
  • cg?%s's Photo

    Don't say actually, it demeans your comment.

    That is, actually, why I said "actually". I wanted to demean my comment.
  • OhioCoasteRFreaK36%s's Photo
    I am not sure how I should feel just now.
  • OhioCoasteRFreaK36%s's Photo
    Anybody else want to comment?
  • JKay%s's Photo
    You're avatar is starting to bug me for some reason OCF :p

    But, about the screen; Very nice. I espcially like the alpine-ish foliage and the splashs of green path; it makes for a really unique atmosphere. The queue line work is top-notch. One thing i don't really like is the underground section of 2x2 path. I dont understand why that has to be underground,..?

    Anyway, proceed on... :)
  • PBJ%s's Photo
    you can have it if you ask ;)

    The combo of green/red/yellow is super.
    i must say that im not a huge fan of showing the entrens and exit of a ride. but in this case it is fine that you did it this way. IMO it´s hard to make a real good "station" for a flat ride but like i said before it´s fine..

    the only thing i´d chance is the fariation of the folwoers you use... put some red or yellowgreen flowers between them ;)

    -PBJ
  • tyandor%s's Photo
    Okay, the upper part of the screen is fine, but the building below needs some texture replacement. You used the wooden wall too much there and unfortunatly the colors can't save it.
  • spiderman%s's Photo
    Not bad. I like the atmosphere you have going, but I'm not liking the light green brick walls you have, it seems too, "odd" for me.
  • FezziSusan%s's Photo
    Alas! Green bricks!

    Pleasant, wooded, swamp. Most excellent.

    -FezziSusan
  • OhioCoasteRFreaK36%s's Photo
    here is a new screen of a restaraunt in the earth section.

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    Enjoy!
  • hobbes%s's Photo
    Good design, but I don't like the red/green colored blocks over the path. They clash too much in my opinion... Also, perhaps some windows on the section to the left/rear?

    Looks good overall, although a bit unfinished...
  • Turtle%s's Photo
    The transition between walls and roof looks strange... not sure what you could do though.

    Foliage is nice, and the red works...
  • MudBlood%s's Photo

    here is a new screen of a restaraunt in the earth section.

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    Enjoy!

    very creative name :lol:
  • Metropole%s's Photo
    Sorry to say it, but it's very average. It's just so simple, has very little detail or anything to make it stand out. The roof is dull. There's just nothing there. It isn't bad, and probably looks fine in the park, but it's not the kinda thing I would show in a screen. Sorry

    Metro B)

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