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  • JKay%s's Photo
    Wow, nice stuff OCF. It almost has a classic LL feel to it. I love the atmosphere goin' on. My only suggestions:

    (1) maybe change the grey landtype under the the benches, but to what I dont know.
    (2) the Roman fences; not sure if they really tie in well with the castle theme. You might play with them.

    Otherwise, beautiful. Keep this up!
  • OhioCoasteRFreaK36%s's Photo
    Thanks guys!

    RCTFAN: what coaster supports are you talking about?
    JKay:I forgot to put on tables on the benches or do you mean my shaded sitting area?
  • JKay%s's Photo

    JKay:I forgot to put on tables on the benches or do you  mean my shaded sitting area?

    Actually, I didn't say the right thing. I actually meant that a grey-tarmac path underneath the benches would look better than the grey-cobblestone one you have, thats all. Very minor.
  • OhioCoasteRFreaK36%s's Photo
    ^ohhhh i got it now..yeah but also with tables it wil basically be nonexistent besides around the edges..
  • AustinPowers%s's Photo

    ^What do you suggest I do to make it look more open?

    I suggest removing some bushes and small trees and having a bit of plain grass showing.

    For Camelot Heights I would use less wood and do something with that square flat roof...like a skinny tower or something. Also, the color scheme seems kind of weird to me.

    Overall its looking good though.
  • OhioCoasteRFreaK36%s's Photo
    Katimba Station.
    Anywhere where there is track besides the station is incomplete..
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    Enjoy!
  • Disney Freak%s's Photo
    Lovely screen you've got there! My one complaint is those fences! They don't seem to fit the rest of the screen... Just my opinion.
  • X250%s's Photo
    I love how you imcorporate land into your architecture, that last screen is really nice. I agree with Disney Freak about them fences though, something about them that does not fit in with the rest of the screen, can't tell what it is though... But it seems to look fine, don't change anything!

    -X-
  • JKay%s's Photo
    I too, love incorporating land (wood walls mostly) into my architecture and this demonstrates why->TEXTURES. I do think the black wood walls for the middle 2x2 tower or even the two tile in front would help distinguish between the buildings. I'm not keen on the glass walls surrounding the tallest 2x2 building; they stand-out too much imo. I see no problem with the ground level fences tho; they actually look nice. The coaster support is nice too. Overall, this is a very appealing screen and really shows your continual improvement OCF...keep goin'
  • OhioCoasteRFreaK36%s's Photo
    DF: I will see what I can do with those fences..the colors aren't matchin it are they? heh
    X:Thanks, like I said i will fix those fences..
    JKay: Yeah those glass walls were an experiment I never took out..Good to see people like my work

    Keep commenting :)
  • VC15SA%s's Photo
    The only thing I don't like is the glass walls on the top of the building. The fences aren't bothering me too much. Looks nice. Good job. :)
  • Richie%s's Photo
    Nice, i like it. However theres a few things about the screen i dont like..

    -the fences, they just dont seem to fit, maybe its just the colours.
    -the support for the lift? You have used 1/4 peices for centered track? It doesnt look even near touching..
    -im not so sure about the foilage, but i dont have any suggestions on what you should do
    -Im not so sure that the spanish rooves fit with the wood landside walls, maybe have less of that wood, change it for marble maybe?

    - i like the stations structure
    - i like the use of landblocks to make the arch over the queue line
    - i like the coaster colours
  • Panoramical%s's Photo
    Keep the glass walls, it shows you are prepared to do something new :)
  • RCT_Master%s's Photo
    I really like this park. The wooden coaster and queue look amazing! Great job. The corkscrew coaster is very cool, nice colors, very original. I'd leave the rocks under the cobra roll, I think it looks good. The station for that coaster is awesome, the textures and colors are perfect! I love the details you put into it. If you keep this going, it'll probably turn out quite nicely! Good luck, keep up the good work!
  • OhioCoasteRFreaK36%s's Photo
    Wanted to show y'all the updated front of the station, where i added ticket takers for fast pass and i changed a few structural things..ok one..
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    Enjoy!
  • inVersed%s's Photo
    Very nice, OCF this park really looks nice. Amazing Detail.
  • OhioCoasteRFreaK36%s's Photo
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    The kiddie section..lots of colors :)
  • Jacko Shanty%s's Photo
    take the brown away completely and stick to one shade of red
  • Geoff%s's Photo
    it's definitely got a feel from deano's last tussauds park.
  • JKay%s's Photo
    ^I agree. The colors are pretty wild, but still appealing. I'm not sure about the yellow turret fences, but I suppose they work for a kiddie section. Nice work! (as usual). :)

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