(Archive) Advertising District / Project: CLR
- 13-October 04
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Geoff Offline
Katimba?
XD
It's a nice start, but it's waay to incomplete. You should have at least custom supports done before posting a shot of the coaster. -
OhioCoasteRFreaK36 Offline
I have never done custom supports on cobra rolls..i dont know what style they would need for it. The style i have goin on the lift hill is very similar to the supports on slob's Intamin Multi Looper in his PT Entry with the quarter tile pole going straight up and the slanted thin support going out with wood poles inbetween. -
OhioCoasteRFreaK36 Offline
I am trying to upload a new screen to rctd but when i click view file it keeps saying the 404 thing...... -
Panoramical Offline
Well try going to this link:
http://www.rctd.ft6....uploads/{INSERT WHATEVER YOUR FILENAME IS HERE}
...without the {} -
OhioCoasteRFreaK36 Offline
got it!
I think it was the fact that i had an apostraphe (sp?) in there. so Pano you have 3 versions of the same photo haha..sorry..if you can delete them take out joey's and joey'scork both .jpg, i just need joeyscork.jpg.
Anyways onto the screen!
This is a nice restaraunt I built in Coral Cove, you can also see the corkscrews of Katimba and the final helix of the ride.
Enjoy! -
Richie Offline
I think you need to be more adventurous with you pathing. At the moment it looks like this will be a huge long straight path. Try to vary the width in places. Add small 1 tile seating areas here and there (not too many), try not to make the path go straight for too long. Ill talk to you on aim later if this isnt making sense to you. IM kinda tired,i just woke up. -
gir Offline
Mmmmm.. I hope it's an Arrow and not Vekoma. I'm very picky about Arrow layouts so it better be good. -
JKay Offline
This is an amazing screen OCF. You obviously are begining to hone your parkmaking skills to develop your own personal style; very impressive. My only two suggestions:
1. Maybe use a different color scheme for your flower beds. To me, flowers that accent or contrast the architecture and coasters would make for a better atmospere.
2. I feel that slightly less foliage would also improve the atmosphere of this area. Maybe clumps of foliage with a few rock or mud blanks spots would help because the way you have it now, the foliage envelops too much of the landscape. -
OhioCoasteRFreaK36 Offline
Thanks for the comments.
Richie: I know..the pathing is boring..i am spicing it up..or trying to.
Gir:Oh yeah..vekomas hurt too much..
JKay:All but the orange accent the architecture and rides..and you told me on aim that 2 doesnt count..since there is a small lake now.
Scorchio:Why not?
New screen..2 shops and a eating area by a lagoon.
A bit incomplete but not too bad.
Enjoy! -
X250 Offline
I love the colours in this park, it makes every screen interesting to look at. The archy is nice too, as is the tree selection. I don't think i can fault anything in this screen...
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Turtle Offline
Slight overload of orange in that last screen, and you need to add benches/lamps etc. -
inVersed Offline
You know what I think about this OCF. I love it, the details are supurb. Great Job! -
JKay Offline
Wow, brilliant color scheme, and I think if you had a few two-tone umbrellas for those tables it would make this color scheme even better, plus add atmosphere. The rest is solid work too, don't quit with this park! -
OhioCoasteRFreaK36 Offline
Thanks for the comments.
Steve: ..sorry that didnt really affect me haha!
X250: thanks..glad i did somethin good
Turtle: lamps and benches will come..that is the last thing i do in parks..not sure why..
RAS: Thanks man!
JKay: ok i will add umbrellas, and don't worry..this park is stayin -
AustinPowers Offline
I like the open feel created in the last screen...my only suggestion is to clean up the area of bushes and trees in the middle of the pathing, right now it is too busy for the feel of the rest of the screen. -
OhioCoasteRFreaK36 Offline
^What do you suggest I do to make it look more open?
I have a new screen from Camelot heights, shows a circus, an eating area, a new shop, and part of a nice big wooden building, also you see some nice landscaping.
Enjoy! -
RCTFAN Offline
This looks incredible. The colours are a really nice contrast compared to most recent parks, gives life to the place. Also i really like the medieval theme, especially the queue. I think you need to try custom supports on the whole coaster instead of just the hill.
Keep it up
edit* lol just saw the question. To make it more open i would say get rid of a few of the trees, apart from that i think it looks open enough.
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