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This park is 170x170 and will have 5 planned areas: Coral Cove, Camelot Heights, Unnamed swampland, Unnamed American Zone, and a 1 ride area that will have a witch hunt adventure ride.

I will show you a small screen of my wooden out and back coaster Gauntlet and a shop and part of the queue from the Camelot Heights Section and a teaser of Coral Cove.

First off we can see the turn before the lift hill on Gauntlet a Wooden Out and Back coaster.


And then a pizza shop and an arch over the path in Camelot Heights.


And a small part of the queue going under the lift hill of Gauntlet.


And then a small teaser of Coral Cove


Enjoy and please give some comments!

More to come!

Everything looks great at the moment, first three screens look perfect and i can find nothing to suggest. I love the queue in the third screen.

In the last screen however, it may just be me but i think you need a different land-type, maybe sand mixed with the light dirt you have now?

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I love the name of that coaster

You need to lower your water on that last screen, it's right on the edge of the land.
Otherwise looks great, I agree about that que line, excellent idea!

For some reason the faded red, gold, and blue of the coaster works perfectly with the gray medieval style of the buildings. Bravo.

It looks really nice. The thing that bothers me is the green table in the last screen... it lookse really out of place.

Thanks for the comments.

X250: yeah i think i will add alot more of the main sand type to it.

Kumba:

hobbes:That land is a beach and it is meant to be same level as the water.

Panic: Thanks alot!

RAS: There are more green tables it is just how i cut the screen..the next one is just off the screen on the right top.

I need some help, I am trying to build a nice corkscrew coaster but i am not good at those sort of coasters, anyone have links to downloads or good revealing screens of well designed corkscrew coasters so i can get some good ideas on what is "good" on corkscrew coasters..I wont copy.

Nice. I like it. As has been said the beach could use some sand an maybe an opening to the water & some beach chairs.

Warning: International Odyssey is also 170X170 so just to let you know be prepared to be working on this until next spring unless you flood the map with water and trees! Warning

ride6

Project Calcium Lime and Rust? What?

That little island thing, should probably built up a little unless you purposely want to flood it regularly.

This is a pleasant change from Katonga and appears to fit with your style perfectly, just be careful not to show too much.

It looks great, but the path clashes a bit.

Thanks for the comments guys!

ride6 yes i am aware..this is a big map and to be honest some of it isnt planned yet...but most of it is..i am scared

gir haha yeah i am getting that alot...it is the initials of the parks real name i just dont feel like telling you what it is...

Jkay dont worry i am not showing too much..this is about half of what there is so far.. and they are small screens so you dont see too much..it is 170x170 it will be a while before I am"Showing too much" haha, thanks for the compliments also, i think this is the new and improved OCF..not the old OCF that i was when i built Katonga.

Pano Sorry that is out of date, the path is different..still gray though just it looks better with it all..i dont think it clashes as much.

I have a small new screen of Katimba the corkscrew coaster in Coral Cove, this is the cobra roll and what might be the entrance to the zone but i havnt decided.



Enjoy!

The last screen looks OK I guess. I dont really like the rocks under the cobra roll though, it seems out of place, maybe try to do something about it or take it out.

I really like the coasters color scheme and the foliage looks awesome. great job!

Thanks for the comments,

sfgadv02: The rocks look better in the game dont worry.

RAS: Thanks!
Any other comments?

I love the (home made) fence! but plz get rid of the palm lamps...

I'm not entirely sure about the landscaping below the cobra roll, it looks too blocky to me - or maybe just the shape is strange. I guess it will look better when more is built up around it - really like the fence also, but I say keep the lamps! Make them not as symmetrical though...

The land sides should be dirt, how is rock land going to have wooden sides?

The single conflict in that last screen lies in the fact that the wood arches over the paths are a nice touch, probably better than dirt sides would be, but the rock face doesn't fit with the wood sides too well. It's not an expressly bad match, just it looks like natural clashing with articifial. Maybe make it dirt and then stick a something x3 building right across the path in front of the entrance to the rock cave, to hide the dirt arches and act as a gateway into the cave.

^that might be what i do here...Thanks for the comments!