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project enduro:

this park will be layed in a few sections:

tomahawk: entrace point: this will be an chinese/japanes themed area with fun little picknik places and some small attractions, nothing really stunding.

bermuda traingle: this area based on the real bermuda traingle will have much broken ships and airplane's and will feuture an nice woody.

ways to the future: this area based on an book: ways to the future, will be fully themed in future it will have an base on mars and much more.....

anyway,nuff talk:

here you can see tomahawk(entrace) and i little from the bermuda traingle where you follow a group of people who has chrashed with there airplane in the middle of the bermuda traingle!



EDIT:i removed the rainy bmp screen.
screenie

Wow, this is really an improvement from the last stuff I saw from you. This screen has a retro LL feel to it with a very pleasant atmosphere. The foliage is well-placed. My only gripes are:

1. The woodie tracks used as roofs appear to be the same as the actual woodie you have in the in the upper left corner. I would suggest making either the bits of track or the woodie itself different colors so the viewer can distinguish between what is a ride and what is roof.

2. The gongs. Too many of'em. IMO, some other pieces of 1/4 tile scenery would be better.

3. Try not to take your screens while it is raining; it'll make for a better-quality screen.

Wow, this is really an improvement from the last stuff I saw from you.  This screen has a retro LL feel to it with a very pleasant atmosphere.  The foliage is well-placed.  My only gripes are:

1.  The woodie tracks used as roofs appear to be the same as the actual woodie you have in the in the upper left corner.  I would suggest making either the bits of track or the woodie itself different colors so the viewer can distinguish between what is a ride and what is roof.

2.  The gongs.  Too many of'em.  IMO, some other pieces of 1/4 tile scenery would be better.

3.  Try not to take your screens while it is raining; it'll make for a better-quality screen.

And #4...

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Ooooh i Love these LL/RCT2 parks. Nice work, but you've used the gongs too liberally imo.

I dont like the water part with the wall and stuff..and i dont like the foliage..it is all green

very nice DJ. I have to agree with Jkay on this one... big improvment!

Change the colors of the flowers, they all seem very dead, and very ugly. I would also tone down on the gongs, there are a lot of them. Other than that, keep up the good work.

thanks everyone for the replies:

jkay: thanks for the tip about the woody!and yes i will cut down on the gongs.
titan:already fix it.
panamorical: thanks man, see above for the gongs.
ohiocoasterfreak:thanks for the reply, i know the folaige is to green, i will bring some other colors in the folaige.
dragonfly: again thanks!anyway see above about the flowers.

fanta

I'm not convinced by the track as roof. If your going for the chinese style then you might try other roofs out of objects (if you selected good ones though) Other than that it look decent to me.

I actually really, really like those wooden coaster track rooves. They help give the tops of buildings a flowing feel, instead of the choppiness you can sometimes get from using scenery. Somehow the combination of coaster track and scenery for buildings works superbly. Change the coaster colors if you want, to give a little more variation to the theme.

Roller coaster track rooves=RCT1.

Sez who?

I agree - the wooden rooves look good, especially for an Asian theme.

Also, yeah, there may be a FEW too many gongs - I can imagine some insane peep goin' 'round and bashing every single one of 'em. The sound wouldn't be too pleasant, especially for one standing directly in range of them all.

Sez who?

Says me. I'm too unimaginative. All I see is coaster track. Not a roof. Sorry.

Shut the fuck up.

I like it.

I think the coaster rooves do wonders for the screen. Keep them. I like what you have so far...

I like the coasters used as the rooves, except for the supports underneath. They kind of kill the look of the buildings. In addition to overused gongs, I think you overused the hanging lights too.

Other than those things, I have no major gripes about this screen. It's a great start.

I really like it.
Like everyone else have said, the use of the coaster looks great.
I don't really like the collours of the plants...i would give them the dark red collour.
You could use those chinese roofs like i did with mda instead of the 1/4 tile blocks that you used as roofs to give it a better Chinese / japanes feel...
For the rest, it looks like a good improvement from your other work. Keep it up.

thanks everyone for the replies,anyway new tester here:

tester of the himalaya area

an small tester of the chinese/himalaya area, you can see the open air station of the unfinished woody.

fanatic

thats really nice man, i like how the wooden track covers as a roof in that small middle section. great work on the building designs man. pure beauty, keep up the good work man, making your park look professional.

note those archways look cool and plus the woodie looks like its really being built with a actual process. its really cool how you have the woody turn around that little mountain piece in the middle.looks very cool