(Archive) Advertising District / Disneyland Greece
- 02-September 04
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JKay Offline
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Incredible. You obviously have found the determination to continually get better at this game. I commend you on that.
Now, the screen itself has a few minor flaws imo that I want to point out. First, the tallest waterfall. It seems to flowing from no where. I would try somehow to squeeze one tile of water up there to create source for it. Secondly, I think if you tried to link up all your paths that run through the caves it would give the attraction a sense of order, like its one big walk-through adventure ride one path circuit. Also, it'll be nice to have the right side of the island with some more foliage.....but I know you'll do that
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X250 Offline
Nice work DisneyFreak, you have really got good at this game fast. And you seem to work fast too, i love how you use different foilage to the usual trees/plants, the only thing i can fault is what JKay said about the waterfall starting from nowhere- i usually put the mechanical fence (the one with two holes in it) over the water and a small jet leading from both the holes. It then looks like the water is pumping out of the metal grill then... Or the water tile as JKay suggested.
But please answer me this question... where the hell is that hidden Mickey? Please tell me, it is really annoying me now!
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Disney Freak Offline
lol I'll reveal the Mickey(s)...
Now, about your comments. . . I'll definetely put a water tile or a rapid to make it show like the water is coming from somwhere..
About the path issues, well, I won't be changing it. While I would agree normally it needs to be a more adventerous layout and not complete, here I disagree. When I visited DLP I had the chance to check out The Swiss Family Robinson Treehouse up close. From my observations, although the paths seemed random and broken everything connected to everything. In reality Disney still considers convenience and guest satisfaction. In short, normally I'd agree but since I'm also considering realism I won't be changing the layout.
Thanks for all the wonderful advice. I really enjoy hearing others talk about my work, even about the bad parts... I'll post in about 10 minutes an updated screen. Stay tuned!
Updated screen:
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MightyMouse Offline
The last screen looks a little too wild for my taste. Mabey clean the landscaping and foliage placement up a bit. -
Disney Freak Offline
Well, what would you suggest? I mean, this is jungle themed. The foliage should be wild.. I'm interested in hearing your suggestions on how to clean it up and still make it look Jungily!The last screen looks a little too wild for my taste. Mabey clean the landscaping and foliage placement up a bit.
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The Rick 5 Offline
I've been checking out your park and noticed that there hasn't been a post in a long time. Just wondering if there are any new screens you care to post.
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Disney Freak Offline
Hey, I'm glad you're taking interest in my park. As Iceman said the next update is written in my signature. Don't worry dude, this is one park that won't be cancelled / delayed...I've been checking out your park and noticed that there hasn't been a post in a long time. Just wondering if there are any new screens you care to post.
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Disney Freak Offline
Look what I did... This park just got delayed... I'm very busy lately so for now enjoy this unfinished and probably soon-to-be-changed pic...
Enjoy. I don't expect any proper criticism but a promise is a promise... -
JKay Offline
Thats some quality work right there despite the fact that its desperately unfinished. The white column fences in the middle stand out a little too much for me, but other this screen screams of Disney, which is certainly good. Nice update DF, just finish those screens plz -
X250 Offline
Nice atmosphere once again, unfinished, but yet it creates a nice impression. I certainly like the look of some of the buildings.
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*rct2_lover* Offline
This park is coming along great!
I've never been to disney, but i've seen videos and images, and this is a look a like, i wasn't sure why you got so many neggative comments, it looks like here at NE that if a VERY good park maker posts negative comments, everyone else does, but if a great parkmaker come's along and sais it's great.. Everyone else says it's great!...
I know it's because the image is great, but i've seen some images that are astonishing and yet again people have something negative, i didn't understand, oh well!
Anyways, maybe show a finished screen next time.. They're more pleasing to look at ..
But like Jkay said.. The bone fence stick out too much.. And The park has great atmosphere!.
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*Rct2_lover* ''Usually called ''Trainer on forums now'' -
postit Offline
Very nice! I think some of the quarter inlets of the castle window thingy are severely overused in places, but in other spots it's perfect. Nice job. -
Highball Offline
It's a good start, however I think there needs to be some foilage in the screen. But since it's unfinished, I'll let it slide this time. -
OhioCoasteRFreaK36 Offline
Instead of making the columns white make it grey, with how the lightness is set for the object grey looks like a normal white.
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