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Official announcement ___

July 6 ,04

Micheal Eisner and the Imagineers are proud to present the newest park in the hailed Disney resort chain. Disneyland will consist of 6 themed lands. Those lands are ,

(1)Main Street USA
(2)Fantasyland
(3)Tommorowland
(4)Adventureland
(5)Frontierland
(6)Mickey's Toontown

The resort will also consist of three hotels, A Shopping/Entertainment area, and an 18 hole golf course.


July 21 ,04

Ground has been broken for Disney's newest Theme Park.


Aug 20 ,04

Construction has been speeding along. The Disney Company has released three sneak peaks of some of the beloved attractions of Fantasyland.





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This ain't Disney.. Check out Dawg's Disneyland or Titled Acres for some inspiration. I'd also suggest going to www.disneypix.com for real life pictures of Disney parks. Right now your park lacks atmosphere and detailing, both things Disney depends on to ensure a good time.

Nice screens. Probably be better if they worked though.

Here's Sleeping Beauty's Castle.

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Holly shit! How many Disney Parks there are on this site?

Holly shit! How many Disney Parks there are on this site?

Go count.

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I've never been to a Disney Park before, so I can't really comment on the Disneyish atmosphere.
I think that sometimes simple and short architecture can work, but you've overdone it a bit here. Some of the stuff looks like children's plastecine models. I'll point some stuff out.
First Screen
It's too simple. Make it bigger, and wider and huge. and what the hell is that gold egyptian sculpture doing there?

2nd screen
the green roof building is good, but plastecine is present in the other building. You've missed some stuff out too, like the path going in the building needs a wall going off it. Take more care over things. And this could do with some benches.

3rd screen
and the circus hut is doing what? i'm sorry, but this really isn't all that good. i mean, add some balconies or more plants or something to spice it up. But don't leave a patch of empty lawn...times three!? or some benches. or some stalls. PLEASE.

4th Screen.
I'm not going to comment anymore, just leave it up to you to think what's good. This is really stupidly simple. But it shows you have potential, you've clearly tried to make it more complex. You just need to extend this potential a bit. Keep trying.

1. I do benches last.

1. I do benches last.
2. This is what the real structures look like at the park.This is as accurate as i can get in rct.

Er...it's not a recreation...you said.

I've never been to a Disney Park before, so I can't really comment on the Disneyish atmosphere.

DUDE! I'm going to Disney this wedsenday!

I've been to Disney alot, and atmosphere-conserned, it has Disney as a backbone, but you didn't really express it THAT well. Take a look at the countless(yeah, try to count em) other Disney Parks around. There's quite a few in spotlight(Tilted Acres). So take a good look, then you should buff up the park.

1. I do benches last.
2. This is what the real structures look like at the park.This is as accurate as i can get in rct.

Er...it's not a recreation...you said.

So? Recreating certain structures from the park does not immediately make it a recreation. Take my Disneyland for example. I actually copied the facades of Peter Pan, Pinocchio, and a few shops. But I'm throwing in my own ideas and layout which makes the park original.

As for this park: HS that castle is small. It looks like a doll house almost. Maybe raise it a little and add some roofing to the areas at the base of the towers. Without it the walls look paper thin.
The facades are a good start, but try throwing in some brick red on the roof of Pinocchio. It's too brown.

it's kinda.... bleh....

I suggest downloading Tilted Acres AND Phantasia.... and looking at DisneySea Greece by Disney Freak and Disneyland Park by Mad Dawg....

Also.... suggestion: change the name... there's wayyy too many "Disneyland Park"s goin around.... lol well maybe not, but at least they are all unique by their name... keeping this name makes it sound like.... Mad Dawg's park...

Other than that remember this one thing:

Detail Detail Detail!!

To me it looks like you were trying to incorperate Disney with detail, but IMO it kinda came out.... bleh.

Make the castle ALOT bigger, the castles in real life are way bigger than that, as mentioned before, it looks kinda like a doll house at the moment... The facades looks like you have many good ideas, but you didn't really pay attention to the detail you were putting in the facades, and started putting in useless little details that make it look once again.... bleh. Work on the facades, make the facades a tiny bit bigger, and work on the castle a bit. It looks good with some good ideas, has potential, it just needs a little bit of work to give it that umph...

Take a look at some Disney parks on Google image search, it helps.

thanks guys. All very useful constructive criticism.

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Edit* Whoops, sorry for double posting

Micheal Eisner and his Imagineers are proud to present the newest park in the hailed Disney resort chain.

I really don't like that line. The Imagineers are certainly not "his".