(Archive) Advertising District / The Lost Garden
- 16-August 04
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PBJ Offline
UPDATE: 23-08
Imade a little waterride and here are 2 screens!
^ The Station of the ride...
Hope You Like It!
PS. i want thank Chapel for his hosting! :scarface: -
SirSpinster Offline
Wow it looks very nice...everything's so green! But I like how you've used the color to bring out the theme more. Nice execution there. The architecture is good and detailed...exactly how I like it. The roofing might start to get boring and monotonous pretty soon, though. Maybe do something different with the roofing instead of brown wooden rooves on every single building. But either way, I love this park. Keep posting screens! -
PBJ Offline
it´s time for a update!
But this time i show some screens that are for 18% ready!
The woody that you see on the screens is one that "shoots" away in to the cornaers on the Last screen!
Sorry for showing screens that aren´t ready but i thought is was time for a small update
-PBJ -
JKay Offline
Wow PBJ, your style is really flourishing. I like most of what you've done here. The woodie helicies are nice. The landscaping on the last screen is a little strange in places and it'd be nice to see some other land types in there, but still, this is very nice. Keep it up. -
OhioCoasteRFreaK36 Offline
You need fences along the paths and on the station for the rapids..the glass wall with the window on it..no.. -
PBJ Offline
it´s time for a little update!
in this update 2 things! 1 logo and one new screen.
This logo is made by Jon. and i´d like to thank him for this piece of art! TNKX JON!
also here is the screen! it is the station of the woody i build. the name of the woody is: The Running Stone of Luck. i know it. thinking of names is not the best part of me
Hope you liked it! if not tell me why plz! and if you liked it you can say it also
-PBJ -
Richie Offline
I think the actual structure is all good, but the brown spanish rooves are just a bit boring. If its only brown roof through the area, it will be boring. Try a second roof colour, even a second type of roof peice all together. The orange is nice, try to use another colour in there somewhere though, it looks quite repetetive. -
JKay Offline
For the most part, I really like what you've done here pbj. The color scheme is electrifying, but remains enjoyable. I really like what you've done with the elevated paths as part of the architecture, except that I feel a different path tecture for the elevated sections would look better. Right now, the elevated paths blend with the ground-level paths, thus making them not stick out as observation decks, patio, balconies and what not. But otherwise, very nice. -
coster Offline
hello,
I love the last screen very well !! The archi is very good , and I think that is a great jop!!
I like the woody too. I love the bllocks from toon in youre opark .but i donk like the orange at the windows, but ist is not a problem .
very very good park , I love him , bye coster -
PBJ Offline
Richie: I will try some other roofs to. i use the NE protour WB so there are much other roofs. i will see what i can do with the colors. may some blue or red. i will look what i can do...
Jkay: about the paths. i agree with you. I will see of some wood will be nice....
coster: hello. i keep the orange because i think it is just that little toutch that make it not normal. als o like i said to Richie i will look for some different colors!
Pooolk: tnkx!
and the rest also tnkx for posting...
i think (but i do not promise) that i post 2 more update befor you can DL this small 70x70 park..
-PBJ
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