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- 15-August 04
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Ride6 Offline
Looks kinda like throp's park except less colorful and more refined. I think that it's runner up worthy and these screens show why. You have this style that it really emerging here and could make a splash. It's almost like Pyro but not really...
I like it, now finish it and get some credit (or something )
ride6 -
Dixi Offline
I think it looks mint. Its different to all the other LL parks. Its more generic, but thats good IMO.
Keep up tha good work, homes. -
Leighx Offline
I like it alot there is alot going on and it feels happy ,
i like the second screen the best. -
Steve Offline
The red coaster is ruining an otherwise great screen.
But the rest is lookin' snazzy. Keep this stuff up. -
rctfreak2000 Offline
Too many types of wall and roof textures and no real point behind it. Generic theming isn't appealing either. -
Panic Offline
I might change the colors of the coaster supports to gold or something a little more pale and faded - the yellow kind of overruns the architecture and theming in a few places. -
natelox Offline
I would:
-Make custom supports for the hyper/giga coaster.
-Change the land under the trees to grass or 'mud.' I haven't seen many trees that grow in sand.
-Remove the paths from the buildings (the ones that are on the buildings, not the awnings)
-In the first screen, where you have flowers I would place a less imposing fence. The fences you use infront of the flowers now would, in real life, hide them. -
iamunknown73 Offline
Upon first view, I didn't really like the no-fence-having rooves, because that's the norm for LL, but now I kinda of like it! Not to mention that it's more realistic ... I mean, how many rooves do you know of that have fences/walls surrounding them! Great screens!
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Evil WME Offline
you might just want to make that fence around the flowers as well. I usually don't like seperating paths and flowers either.. but to be honest, i doubt you need to change as much as all those people above are telling you to. Part of this parks strength comes from it not being cliche, and evoking a crisp atmosphere. Too much mud and grass changing, as well as huge supports, might very well take away from that. Just my opinion though, do what you want.. -
Ablaze Offline
It's alright, but it is just how I and a lot of the other RCTU members used to build all the time. All very similar shapes but just different colours. I think I remember seeing the park a while back and it was quite good.
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