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i dont really like the dodgmem building alot either i might try something else there in its place and i might change the yellow glass pieces on top of the building too.

How are people s'posed to breath? In other words, where are the gardens? It looks so dry, bare and claustrophobic.

claustraphobic? what do you mean? and the new area is a wood theme and its got more trees.

this is a picture of the wood themed area an the coaster in it.



tell me what you think

The coaster design is nice, but I find the rest quite boring. I think there's too much wood.

hmm to much wood. ill try some other stuff mixed in with it and see if i lke it.

I think there's too much wood.

I agree with Jkay. There is too much wood. Lighten up on it just a little bit and maybe It'll turn out better. Other than that, I like it all. Keep up the good work DeDevil!

a little bit of my experiments with stuff other then wood. i still want the area to be mainly wood but i kind of like the other wall types mixed in too.
all comments are welcomed.

i made a castle casue ive always thought castles were an insteresting theme. oh and half the park is a lake casue i didnt have any ideas and there was to much space.
the castle area

the castle is surrounded by a wall with a go kart track on it.
and another building to fill up space in the first area

tell me what you think.

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i finshed it finnaly. i ran out out of ideas and put a big lake in it (real creative right) well its finshed. all the screens in the topic give a good idea of what the parks looks like. the read me isnt reall important i just added it. yay my first LL park is done.

You obviously know all the tricks but the problem really has nothing to do with LL, it's your obvious inability to maintain a theme. For awnings, you used just about every path and every ride. Why? Also, try to break up your buildings more effectively...that is how "side architecture" and "awnings" were founded in RCT, cause the game makes big, square, tall buildings look very ugly.

From the screens it looks pretty good. One thing you could improve upon is adding more detail. Paths on the fences, the texture under the paths, more varied terrain, buildings and water to theme your coasters not just trees. Theme-wise you could work on your consistency like Micool said. Your awnings are all over the place like you added them just to add them. Think more about creating a consistent look and then add in the details. The coaster designs look pretty good though and you make good use of a lot of LL building techniques. This is a good start. Now you just need to improve and the only way to do that is to keep building. Good luck.

ok thnaks for the comments. theyll make my next park better. ill have to keep that all in mind when i build my next park.