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This is going to be my first LL park i made in ahwile. i need some feedback cause im new to this.

what do you think?

Get rid of the Tunnel walls on the one building and take out the corkscrew coaster track and put in more foliage and it will be pretty good for starters.

is it just me or is there a slight "back to ll" trend lately?

[font="tahoma"]is it just me or is there a slight "back to ll" trend lately?[/font]

Yes there is... I'd start too if I had LL...

Its because LL kicks ass.

Although this does not. Its random architecture, and random ugly architecture at that.

Oh well, keep playing.

[font="tahoma"]is it just me or is there a slight "back to ll" trend lately?[/font]

People get tired of RCT 2 loading slowly.

i dont like making workbenches and going through 1000s of little scenry pieces and then build alot and realize i forgot some 1 small vital piece. load times also arent great.

how do i make it look less random and better?

how do i make it look less random and better?

[font="Times"]Don't expect us to tell you everything.
As with everything else you need practice.[/font]

[font="tahoma"]is it just me or is there a slight "back to ll" trend lately?[/font]

I sure hope so. I'm the resident Loopy Landscapes luddite here

Your archetecture needs work. You're making a very, very common beginners mistake: trying to encorporate alot of the superficial elements of good Loopy Landscapes architecture, but without any cohesion.

Keep building!

[font="tahoma"]is it just me or is there a slight "back to ll" trend lately?[/font]

Yes there is. I wanted to get back into LL since the day I joined NE, just to see the spotlights and tinker with it. LL really is a more satifying game, but I can't get anywhere near the same results out of it. That's why I still play both.

I don't know what to say to the screen.

ride6

i did some changing. i took out the tunnels on the brick building and i took out the yellow building in the back and made some other changes. its not done yet so no pictures of it yet. i made a coaster and statred themeing it.i also made a carosell.


ill show a pic of the coaster when its done being themed

tell me what you think

Alltough I don't really like the archy, I have to say the Panoramical Tower cabines look awesome on that building. Wonderfull job

I'd say, put also some windows in that last building above the ones on groundlevel, atm the walls are looking a bit empty there. Except that, just practice... and it'll work out. Good luck, DeDevil

See a lil bit of x sector there, the old Tower tops. Try and keep the number of different flowers down. And add things to your archy so it is not as blocky.

blockyness has always been a problem. on almost anything i do i get to blocky or sometthing. oh well heres the one coaster in the park so far.

a small part. theres a inline twist thing inside the heart line coaster i think its called

the whole coaster

I like it, but there's still ots of empty space. I dunno how you could fill that up (haven't LL in forever), but maybe just raise it to make it look a bit more full.

Lots of inversions.

i filled some space with trees in the coaster area and i put a maze in the spot the of the big yellow building in the back from the first screen but i dont really like it much there. im trying to make a race thing where two cars race throud an area. i saw it in another park and i liked the idea so im trying it. im still trying to make the track dissapear. ill try to get a new pic soon

i redid the first pic i showed a bit

another view

tell me what you think

Don't care for the go-kart awning thing. Looks really out of place.

I don't like the yellow building at all (the one housing the Dodgems), and I agree with Ska about the Go-Kart track.

Everything else looks much better though, good job.

These last pics are a major improvement of the first ones. I don't like the emptiness of the side of the building in the lower-left side.

Around the coaster, you could put some buildings on the hill to take away some of the emptiness.
Just a thought.