(Archive) Advertising District / Luminous Cove

Here are some entrance screens. Coming up later are screens to the first area, the Enchanted Forest.

These screens are above average for an NE debut. Very nice Lious, and welcome to NE. You have some nice architecture going here, but my biggest complaints are the dull color scheme and the parts of the roofs where you included glass; its looks a little flat, and the glass does quite fit IMO. But still, these are nice and please continue to update us on your park.

Pretty nice. I like the realisticness of it. I don't like the glass however, maybe put vents and stuff on the roofs.

I like it honestly, I dont see anything wrong with the glass on the rooves, it is pretty realistic but at the same time it isnt. You should put vents on the rooves to make them have less flat. You need to tell me where you got those wooden support walls!

Looks ok, but I would say that the buildings are a little to big, repetive and bland, thus not vey interesting. Try and add little things that will make people will stop at whilst looking at the park and try and figure out how you did that. Thats just me though!

Other than that it looks the norm I guess, which is good around here.

I like everything. but try to get rid of those lime green fence in the first pic. It doesnt fit there. Everything else is perfect.

Thanks for the comments guys.

This area is themed to an enchanted world. Heres an inverted coatser called 'Noxious Nettle' and is themed to an overgrown nettle which is poisenous. The ride was made from inspiration from Nemesis, Alton Towers and usually my Inverts are boring and dull. Anyways here are the screens:

serious deja vu!! looks like th invert from clawton woods, another park being advertised. it does look very good though like that arch the coaster sign is on!!!

I like it a lot, only thing im not to sure about is the mushrooms, but your call of course. I think the colors look nice and the coaster looks like a nice design. Keep up the good work.

-Nitrophobia

I just had I look a Chawton Woods and it does indeed look very similar. I want it to be unique tho, does anyone have any ideas which can make it look more different.

does anyone have any ideas which can make it look more different.

First, don't have a corkscrew as the first inversion.

Second, have a straight first drop.

Don't listen to MachChunk.
The layout looks pretty solid. I would suggest a new color scheme, because as-is, it blends too well with the surroundings. But other than that, I'm really liking it. Maybe add some bare rocks, too (it's lookin' a little over-tree'd).

Love the supports, dude.

Don't listen to MachChunk.

I second that.

Your first screens look very nice and... um, green. I'm diggin' those windows with the shutters. Those look really cool.
As for that sweet invert, don't change a thing with the layout. I've seen many coasters with a Nemesis-like beginning, and you executed it very nicely. The only thing I have to complain about it are the colors. There's just too much green now. But, I like those purple flowers, same thing with the custom supports; nicely done.

Keep up the good work.

Don't listen to MachChunk.

Don't listen to Steve. He doesn't know what I'm talking about.

I was trying to point out how he could make it maore different than RCTFAN's invert.

^ Then why didn't you say that instead when you posted your suggestions?

You're an idiot.

I quoted that part of the post where he asked how he could make his invert more different, didn't I?

You're an idiot.

The colors of the coaster do blend too much but the layout looks just fine. Great job on the landscaping BTW, it's excellent.

The archetecture in your first post looks very good but I would like to suggest that you add another, slightly darker color to contrast with all the green.

Excellent NE deput, you're a threat to many of us that have been here a while.

ride6

I say keep the layout. After the first drop and the corkscrew it looks (from the other screen) nothing like the Chawton Wood inverter. Good work. Only in my wildest and wettest dream could I ever be this good staright from the off.

It's actally his deput at NE. He was at rct2.com for a long time.

Thanks for all the comments! I will keep the coaster layout the same as I am really pleased at the speed the ride does each inversion and as rage said, the layout is different after the first inversion.

Anyways on to screens, I'm onto the plaza in the enchanted area which is centered around some teacups:




(Please note that the buildings in the background are incomplete and are still having little details adding to them, such as hanging flowers, shutters ect.