(Archive) Advertising District / Katonga Valley

oh, well than, make it look less cramped with trees. Thats the only thing i don't like about it.

The sign for the soda shop is gone!

And i have a  new restaraunt (I like food!)..


Enjoy and please comment!

That looks like a yummy restaurant OCF...the architecture is splendid....what do they sell there, oranges and green apples?.....j/k....but a sign letting us know what the restuarant name is would be nice....

It looks very good again, nice colours. I do not know why but that screen reminds me of xophe's building style. But that certainly is no bad thing, this park is getting better and better... Carry on!

-X-

Use low shrubs/bushes. Maybe 1 or 2 1/4 tile trees, but not any large trees around the seating area. Theres no use building something if you cant see it

That last screen looks alot like one of my old parks. Try making your landscaping more flowing. What you need to do is to not raise one square left, say, and the other the totally opposite direction. Have it so that it's all pretty much pointing to the top of the mountain. I think you will find trying this improves that screen alot, and it's what real life mountains look like as well. Click here for more info...

wow OCF, I like that restaurant. It looks good. Get rid of the tall trees that are right next to the path in order to see the eating area.

I would definitely rename the woodie on the first page just "Carnage" if you haven't already.

Thanks for the comments guys, i redid the landscape by the outdoor sitting area and you can see it from all around now..didnt change much else..i did add a sign on the front and it says burgers.
Panic what is your theory behind changing it to just carnage? I might change the name all together as it doesnt fit the theme


Jeep station.

Enjoy!

I cant say theres anything wrong with it... it loooks good strucurly, and some nice details help it. I like the green.

1 pick, is the single wide path going into the building, but thats just a personal preference.

Also, make sure you finish off with benchs lamposts and stuff.

Quite nice OCF....the only thing that bothers me are the green window / building accents that don't really contrast the surrounding foliage, and as richie said, some benches, litter bins, lamps would help give the area a finished look.

Hello.


OCF...

I'd like to do a walkthrough of this park to post in one of my articles...
If you are interested in letting me do that, IM me or e-mail me the park.

Xx Raven SDI xX
or
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