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These are screenshots from parts of a park I did a while back. I am new here at new element and I wanted to show some shots of my work. The screenshots are the oldest parts in the park, as the newest areas in the park I do not want to release untill after QFTB X.

I am up against a man I hear is a legend around here, Toon. So I need all the help I can get.

It has some ideas I would like to keep a secret for now.

Anyway please comment on the screenshots below.

Here are the pics

http://www.rctdimens...load/roman1.JPG

http://www.rctdimens...ad/primary1.JPG





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Edited by Zach, 01 July 2004 - 03:58 PM.

By the way, could anyone please say if they can actually see the pics as it is my first time posting pics and i would like to know if i did it right.

The pics are there. It looks like you have some talent. There are a few things in the pics that I don't really like, but for the most part they are interesting and different from the norm which is good. If these are your old work, I look forward to seeing what you come up with in QFTB. (just don't make it too good )

It's not bad at all, but it does need a little more details here and there. I relly like the idea with the monorail/aquduct thing. Keep it up.

not bad, do more with the jagged rocks, they look too plain

Emperiors Layer

I don't think those words -- if they are words -- mean what you think they mean.

Emperor's Layer lmao L0l haha

Anyway like the first screen but not a fan of the second.

I thinks it's ok so far. But do yeshli2nuts said and do something with the jagged rocks. They don't look good at all right now IMO.

The buildings are boring and bland, they ar very monotonus and repetitive. Add some windows and very up hte colors, the landscaping is also rathe bland, other then that its merely a subpar park. Oh yes, and please take some speeling classes.

They are pretty good...you just need to add some windows and add more foliage around the area.

I like the the second pic, the first pic though........

very nice color archy. and landscaping...

by the way.. where is Coaster?

guljam i agree. lets see something else than some buildings plz.

A few of you have mentioned that you do not like the jagged rocks, have you any ideas of what to do to them to make them more interesting.

well if people don't like them, how about you get rid of them?

If I were you, I would look for criticisms that are easily fixed for this park. Something like redoing or getting rid of the jagged rocks is too time consuming, and you are better off finishing this project and experimenting with new styles and ideas in your next park. Too many people scrap they're projects around here, and nothing gets finished. Remember that most of the peeps responding here are not any better at the game than you. Most of the comments are just based on what they've heard others complain about in the past, or even rehashing previous comments in your thread. Just express yourself as you see fit.

oh snap, toon is in trouble! first round knockout!

The buildings are boring and bland, they ar very monotonus and repetitive. Add some windows and very up hte colors, the landscaping is also rathe bland, other then that its merely a subpar park. Oh yes, and please take some speeling classes.

I find that spelling comment pretty funny after reading your post.

Anyways I really like your first screen, but something about the second screen bothers me. Its probably the jagged rocks, but I guess that would be time consuming to get rid of. Anyways good luck with the rest.

I find that spelling comment pretty funny after reading your post.

Anyways I really like your first screen, but something about the second screen bothers me. Its probably the jagged rocks, but I guess that would be time consuming to get rid of. Anyways good luck with the rest.

Wow those are called typos, and considering the fact I don't know how a typo can make emperor's turn to "emperiors" and lair turn to "layer", thats why I said he needs to take spelling classes. I stand by what I said. I do know how to spell vary, are, the, rather, and spelling. So I guess from now on I will read through my posts since you demand total perfection in typing. It's the Iternet, the only reason I said that he needs spelling classes is merely for the fact that he should at least be able to spell "lair" and "emperor's".