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Looking purely at the building I really like it, other than some of those disorganized windows... The building looks exactly how I would expect a "hero building" (to rip off Ed's term) of Atlantis to appear, then I look at those rocks. They're way too, blah. Plants or another texture mixed in would do wonders.

ride6

I like it. The building is excellent, but as Steve mentioned, the landscaping is too uniform. Makes it look unnatural. I also don't like the random window placement there. And there's a thin pillar with a window that I think should go (the window that is). It could do with some foliage, but as bruckner said, the kinda screen that I can't give that kinda comment on unless i see the whole thing.

Metro

My only question about that screen is "why"?

^ why?

Yeah I see what you mean by landscape issues but thats just because of the way the screen was taken. It looks different when its seen in all of its surroundings.

I always thought the flowers went well with the building...hmmm....

Thanks for the comments.

Why is there a massive building there? It looks good, but I can't tell what the building does, which annoys me.

Was going to say it looks like a nice big pointless building, or a space filler. Please dont tell me its a coaster inside, imo thats just lazy theming, and makes it a boring ride to watch.

or maybe its an atlantis palace or maybe a place of worship. not everything has to be a shop or restaraunt, geez use your imagination, this is atlantis! also not every building needs to have a big fat sign on it to serve a purpose.

anyways, kevin this is wonderful, the whole screen screams atlantis to me and i love it. richie i wouldnt say that dark coasters are boring, you can make a dark ride very fun to watch.

amazing work kevin, keep it up.

It's looking good. The detail is immense and you've picked an interesting style and colour range.

If that is all you have to contribute, then why bump a topic that hasn't been updated for a nearly a month where others who have recently posted updates on their parks watch their topics fall down the pages, when in honesty, that post has added nothing to the topic and given no feedback or anything on the park.

Overly long sentance ended.

Metro

haha...
Looking through the past screens in this topic i dont think i need to give any constructive criticism, Kev is well on his way to making a gorgeous park.. like everyone else i want this park to be released.

             

i hate you.

uh, thanks..i guess.

all the screens looks wonderfull, and I can certainly feel the Atlantis theme, you might need more interaction with the water since they used water for everything, and the whole Atlantis was crossed in rings of water, at least that's the story

uh, thanks..i guess.

Now you know how I feel everytime WDE gets needlessly bumped. Slightly amused, thankful and slightly flattered that someone's revived it, tho slightly preoccupied with the renewed desire by the collective to have you finish this.

Now you know how I feel everytime WDE gets needlessly bumped.  Slightly amused, thankful and slightly flattered that someone's revived it, tho slightly preoccupied with the renewed desire by the collective to have you finish this.

thanks for the tip.

I had a sudden urge to work on this:


Not exactyl complete, but good enough.

So yeah, I haven't been around a lot, mostly because my RCT interests goes up and down once in a while. The thing is i'm tired of RCT2 and I want to move on to RCT3 but my computer is not powerful enough to make a serious park... so I don't really play the game anymore, hehe.

But I actually felt like playing the game today. and I still sort of do, lol
Hopefully I'll have another update in the future.

I like the archy on the edge of the cliff, that really adds to the scene and your coaster going through the village looks great aswell. All in all a great screen.

That's definitely good - this looks like a park I could lose myself in. It's kinda epic. I do hope you finish it.

i dont think that screen is anyone near as good as the rest of them. the beige walls dont go well with the grey walls, green trees, and brown landscape. the grey walls look kind of bare, not nearly as detailed as well as the previous screens and those yellow windows to fit either. i can let you go on the suspended coasters layout since there really isnt much to do with that type of coaster but it really needs custom supports.