(Archive) Advertising District / Ports of Discovery
- 16-April 04
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Steve Offline
I'm sorry, but this screen is just, orgasmic for me. I find it wonderful.
What's with the SDI sign? Is that the headquarters or something? -
Marshy Offline
Great screen.
There are part's of it I like and part's of it I don't like. The first thing that I notice when I study the screen is the building at the top, it's too "thin" and "skinny", plus the wooden poles at the bottom of the building (just to the left over the path seem to be floating...a little too much.
The folaige looks cool, but the small jungle tree's look a little weird. The coaster looks great, and I can't wait to see it in-game, but the supports over the queue on the turnaround look a little strange. I dunno, it's the fact that it goes over a lot of path while travelling diagonally, which makes it appear to float.
Great work. -
artist Offline
that floating deck is the best thing since sliced bread, well done my man.
also brilliant job on the architecture, it is fabulous, keep this shit up and send me the park.
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Leighx Offline
I actually quite like it the wooden looks quite impressive but i dont think the angle does the screen much justice, it is going very well.
Keep up the good work.
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Toon Offline
The coaster looks too close to the map edge for my liking. Other than that, this is one of my least favourite of your screens. Just lacks any real magic. Still good work, just not your best imo. -
Aeroglobe Offline
Some nice atmosphere going right there. Maybe clean up the paths that go over the water right at the top of the screen?
Looks good to me.
Aérôglòbe -
CoasterForce Offline
I don't think this is "godly" or incredible by any means. But it is still nice. I've never really liked that shade of brown track for woodie colors, and the foliage could use some work, it just seems a bit barren. I like the atmosphere and the turnaround, though. -
Evil WME Offline
Uhm... the woodie turn-around looks a bit ugly to me. I do like the building left in the screen, but i think the ones on the right look like they still need to be touched up, and could have more 'base' to them. -
Turtle Offline
Hmmm. I'm undecided.
First, the bad points.
- I don't like the colours of the woodie. The red doesn't work, really.
- The foliage looks too....random near the edge of the map. I think the map edges are the hardest to make look good, and that's why I spend at least twice as much time on them as I do with normal scenery.
- I don't like the tree coming up through the observation deck.
- The pathing in the upper right hand corner looks like it needs touching up.
Now, the good points.
- It shows how much thought you are putting into this, from the guest's perspective, as well. I love how this is still definitely a park, and so it has seating areas and viewing areas etc.
- That patch of pink flowers by the coaster is undeniably lovely.
- The architecture is complex enough to keep my attention, without looking too cluttered.
- Loving the tree in the middle of the path, looks great with no fences etc.
- I don't know whether the flowers in the building on the right are meant to be unwatered, but I really like them that way.
I'm glad to see more of this park, and I look forward to the completion. Keep this up! -
Ride6 Offline
New page!JKay, Richie, whoever...I'll IM you later.
As for now:
I find it to be quite excellent too. Total visual orgasm at first glanse. At a closer look some of the buildings are too "thin" they looks like a strong wind would blow them right to the ground. Otherwise the map edge looks a bit sloppy and stuff too (although there's at least a few cases where mine have looked worse).
Even so I love it man. The architecture (in general) has struck a balance, and thats' special in a very, very good way.
ride6 -
x-sector Offline
I agree with toon on this screen. the coaster is way to close to the map egde for my liking but Thats a personal thing that I have never liked. Its not the best screen out the bunch either -
Kevin Offline
I don't have a screen update or anything..just telling you guys what is going on with the park.
Lately, I've been finishing up school and learning how to make digital art and 3D animations with certain programs... so I haven't really worked on the park at all this month, just a few touches on some of the buildings and thats it.
By the end of this week construction will resume and I will hopefully finish the park sometime next month.
What I need right now though, is someone to build a coaster for me. It's in the last area and I am completely out of ideas on layouts and elements, and I can't come up with a good coaster at all. I need someone to help me out, generally someone who is great at coaster building, obviously... -
Kumba Offline
Id do one if you like, as you know I have seen the park a few times alreddy and I think I can see that your going for. Im not sure what type you need, but imo I do best with B&M's and Wooden Coasters.
Edit: Yes, take slob if you can, that would be awsome -
Ride6 Offline
Want duelers? (me?)
I would go with slob though, really. Or maybe WME...
Or you could try to convince Posix or Coaster Ed to give it a shot in LL, that would be pretty cool.
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inVersed Offline
Very nice Kevin. quite magnificent. I dont know what to say its just simply amazing, great work.
I await the release of this. -
artist Offline
[font="arial"]My coasters aint bad, i would love to give it a go man, what you looking for?
Also learning digital art is the best, so i thank you for learning.[/font]
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