(Archive) Advertising District / Middle earth quest
- 16-April 04
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artist Offline
My orgasm is over nowIt's nice, but nothing to have an orgasm over. I saw a better ship in LL the other day, might have been fatha's disney park, not sure though.
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super rich Offline
Looks ver nice,
I especially like the little pirate drowning, no idea why???
Looking good and im looking forward to more. -
Leighx Offline
ok time for an UPDATE:
Thought it would be nice to have a little logo for this section of the park.
Seeing as i have showen quite alot of Rivendell, i think its time to move on from that area because its getting abit boring for you lot to look at.lol
Anyway i have started work on the outskirts of Mordor and got quite abit done. So here is a small screen of the start of Mordors ouskirts.
Thanx to Chris for the little logo.
and i couldnt reist putting effects on the screen.
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gymkid dude Offline
nice logo...
just something about the screen is wrong. Maybe the whole area will have a "dark and I own you" effect seeing a sea of black with flames, but that screen alone almost looks too jolly. I want to see you make that tower with the eyeball. -
Jacko Shanty Offline
Eh.. it's okay, but not your style. Don't conform to 2x2.. I tried that style too and it didn't work. Pretty dull colors too.. but I don't know the theme you're going for. It looks sort of like a village, but you're going to need a couple more colors for that. Landscaping is lacking too. -
deanosrs Offline
Mordor needs to be more "devoid" than that I think. I know it's the outskirts, but I'd use a darker path and perhaps put destroyed effects on some of the buildings. I think this is leighx style though, it's very similar structurally to his rctx mini park,.
***Edit: I never like telling people what to do in parks, it's yours not mine, but if I was building this I'd use the black wood sides a lot in the landscaping. That would help the dark, evilness of it no end imo. -
artist Offline
Imo it needs to be much darker and look more evil.
I think the problem is you are using to much brown,which basicly looks shit. Try using more blacks and greys.
I dont think you need to make the buildings have more colour, you could do that with some folige and fire.
Some of the buildings should be bigger, make mordor seem like its overpowering the park, not fit with the rest of the 2x2 style.
Oh and btw whoever made that logo baiscly just rules -
Metropole Offline
Hmmmm. I don't think that brown wood works well here. It may make it look darker, but it's nothing like Mordor IMO. Needs to be more twisted and evil.
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Richie Offline
It doesnt have a darken atmosphere at all IMO. I really dont like any of it, and the pirates look odd in there too. -
JKay Offline
Seems like a tough theme to capture, but I think you did a pretty good job with it leighx....I espcially like how you incorporated those ash/black raised-paths into your architecture....however the wondering entertainers do look odd and like jacko said, your 2x2 archy is quite apparent here, you might want to mix that up a bit....overall a nice screen and logo...good job... -
Leighx Offline
Thanx for the comments.
They were useful i will try to add a more metaly feel to it, and much more black.
I know the pirate entertainers dont fit in but thats the closest thing i can get to an orc?
And as for the path i dont have alot of dark paths its either the grey or the black.
And the flowers give it to much of a welcoming feel so i'll scrap all plants.
oh and Gymkid i will have the eye up soon.
thanx again.
and i should have an updated version of the screen soon....
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Richie Offline
Then dont use anyI know the pirate entertainers dont fit in but thats the closest thing i can get to an orc?
BTW, it was me that said about the pirates JKay -
Leighx Offline
^ yeh but the park kind of needs entertainers but oh well just for you i took them out of this screen.
And here is the improved screen with hardly any brown.
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Richie Offline
I didnt mean it like that^ yeh but the park kind of needs entertainers but oh well just for you i took them out of this screen.
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This new screen is better, but im still not wowed by it, it just looks too dull to me (even with the theme your trying to capture). I think adding a green, maybe a tad more brown might help, im not sure. I dont know the film. -
Leighx Offline
lol,Whats different? They look like the same screen..The logo is cool.
they werent before, but its changed, cos i overwrote the screens.
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