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its all flowing very well i must say this is amazing, its just the pink path on the 2nd screen seems a lil weird might need to change that to a darker color


Nick

This is one of the best ucoming projects IMO. I've loved almost every screen wou have shown. I didnt like the unnatural waterfall but now its gone, i guess i do like it all.

04.15.04- Today both the boardwalk and Chilie was finished. Also construction was started on Persia.

Entrance- 100%
Chile- 100%
Boardwalk- 100%
Egypt- 7%
Persia- 10%

Entire- 51%(in 5 days[92x92])

The park is actually pretty damn good.

My main suggestion would be to have more structure in your buildings. Make them slightly large and look less flimsy. Great work otherwise.

Metro

lookin really nice chris, the only thing i dont like is the palace, cant wait to see the finished project, or mayb a little pre-release for your best friend :-p

04.16.04- New coaster is being constructed in Persia. Expected to reach heights of 200ft.

Entrance- 100%
Chile- 100%
Boardwalk- 100%
Egypt- 10%
Persia- 20%

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You seem to be into the half-ass buildings. Many flat rooves, large open spaces, yet you are not going for the fantasy thing, are you? You wouldn't have a coaster going down a waterfall.
Nevertheless you have some good ideas in this park.
Make your architecture more advanced and solid, at the moment you have random outcroppings of buildings which fail to be needed.
Use the same colors as you seem to hit that off decently well, very safe they are.
Oh, and by the way, the logo is horrible!
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No I'm not half assing the buildings I'm just building what I like and having fun doing so. I dont think people should change around their parks just because some comments. I will do it to somethings because I look at them again and agree but really I'm just building this park for fun and not for it to win any prize. Thanks for the comments though I will keep some of them in mind.

I see nothing wrong with the buildings. So what if it's a different style? Doesn't meant they're 'half-ass' (words of wisdom )

I think you could maybe add another level to the building, that flat roof does look kinda plain. Something else that i think could be changes is that blood red archway. It stands out a lot, and although there is a lot of blood red that works, it doesnt fit IMO. I think it could be toned down to a brown, maybe the more pale red?

The main thing is you having fun, that is the aim of the game. Keep it up, im really loveing this park so far.

Hmm well i see some screens that make me think this park is great, then i see others that totaly put me off.

This screen is fantastic


But that screen with all that bare,fucked up landscaping is a turn off and so is that disgusting waterfall, tbh it looks nothing like a waterfall.

Sort it out dude, have a look at some other parks to help you out because like i said, some of this park looks great.

It would be a shame if the rest sucked.

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Exactly what I was thinking. And those supports on the floorless are terrible, don't use the wood and Arrow/Vekoma/whatever supports on a B&M. Use the real thick supports on it like Kumba and Phatage do, which is why their coasters look real. Obviously.

04.21.04- Two screens released and flat rooves are fixed. Also all areas are finished except Egypt.

Hmm...

It's a bit cluttered in my opinion, try making the paths three or even four tile wide. By real-life standards, four could be considered bare minimum. You usually need two directions of flow, so with four tiles you'd have two tiles per direction. In RCT that translates into two-people wide lanes. That means, it would be safe to go as far as to build twelve-across in some places. However, for the sake of the game I won't ask you to do that. I just went off into my own little world there.

Also, I think you've overused those walls with all the little arches. They only add to the confusion in this screen (imo) and you can see right through them so they look flimsy. I do like the little gazebo-type area near the water, until you get to those wavy wall tiles. I never was too fond of those. Then, the top of it looks like it's about to fall over.

Overall, I think the colors may be a bit too excessive, as well as the scenery. I don't know, theres some other stuff that I could point out as well...I won't bore you with any more criticism, it's your park just have fun.

EDIT: Come to think of it, the bridge at Sea World Orlando is only about three or four people wide. Obviously four is acceptable, even though that bridge is quite crowded -- especially after Shamu shows and/or at lunch time. (Seeing as the Waterfront is a great place to eat! )

Wider paths would be nifty so that we can view all the effort and detail you're putting into this. Otherwise I like the last few screens, alot.

ride6

And I must do it again...

Moreover, most every "suggestion" given to this park has been, in one way or another: build like everyone else, follow cliches and be a dull fucking sheep. To that I say: screw the fuckers.

but now it's like "fix that" or "that needs to be changed" and "why aren't you perfect?"

I dont think people should change around their parks just because some comments. I will do it to somethings because I look at them again and agree but really I'm just building this park for fun and not for it to win any prize.

chapel+, I love you for staying strong and for defending your originality against others. And one can really use the word "defend" here. If you really mean what you say then I'm sure you'll have a bright RCT future, unlike many others on this site. I also love how you do proper advertising. More than half of the park is finished and you have started to advertise just at the right moment. All the screens look very very nice. I hope you'll be parkmaker'd soon after this release.

Thank you posix I'm flattered on your parkmaker comment.


This new area is based on some of my favoite California songs. Here is the building Hotel California housing the station to Californacation. It will be replacing Egypt.

chapel(proud member of RCTD)

Love it Chapel, but you knew that.

-Frank

Wow, you're starting to get better with each screen. Keep practicing.. and you'll be up there pretty soon. One suggestion: switch the pink on the coaster to say.. dark brown? I dunno.. pink doesn't look very fitting to me.

Thank you posix I'm flattered on your parkmaker comment.


This new area is based on some of my favoite California songs. Here is the building Hotel California housing the station to Californacation. It will be replacing Egypt.

chapel(proud member of RCTD)

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You didn't get the point of his post, the only reason he likes your work is because he sees some of him in you.
With defending your work and all, we ALL know that defending your work makes you a good parkmaker.
Right Posix?
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