(Archive) Advertising District / Great Germany Resort

Hi everybody,

this is the first park i present here in this forum. i though long about it, because all the parks here are so spectacular and so amazing. And i think i am not so good, yet. I built much parks but in this park i will present my real skill. Thats difficult because this park is real. It doesnt excist in reality but i build it real. you know what i mean

It will have lots of theming zones like egypt, fantasy beach and so on. stay tuned to look about it

here the first screens.
the entry:


The first Small Coaster "Mouse Rocks"


and the actual overview


please ctism me good and bad
I hope you understanded me (i am german)
and i hope you enjoy (a little bit) the screens

Greetings Joju

i think that you should only keep the universal theme, not disney and universal, they would never join

i made a few things better i think:

That's a really refreshing look - and I really like the little black patterns on the roofs.

Good job - keep going with it because it looks like it'll be fun to look through when it's done.

You should have started on a smaller bench... But if you stick to it, it'll turn out great.

Your style reminds me of how voodoo used to build, only more detailed. My suggestions are to take off the black on the new building and make it a different color, and to put dirt or a different land type besides grass under the paths.

I like it, but there's too many colors. Maybe take out one of them.

Around the "Mouse Rocks" coaster(that's a stupid name, by the way), you don't have a good tree selection. Might I suggest taking out a few tree types and adding in ones that correspond to the theme.

thanx all for your critism, i made a few betters at the coaster. The think with the dirt under the path i make soon.

here a flat ride with landscape and final theming. beyond will be more trees and i think there i make one more house. Here the pic:





enjoy it

1. Change the name because it sounds funny and Disney and Universal would never join.

2. I don't like the name "Mouse Rocks!"

3. You will get criticized very hard on this vecause it has the name Disney attached to it.

4. Use dirt or some other ground than grass under some of the paths.

helpless

ok i change the name of the park

i call it only Great Germany Resort

but i can't change the name of the thread, that have to make a moderator / admin.
i will change the name of the coaster too

thx and stay tuned

i built a great wooden racer, it is on a river (river isn't completet, it will be build longer on the one end if i am there with building!) and its in the wood. Called River Race:

i changed something

I like the idea of the wooden supports as signs.


My park is a Dinsey/Universal joint park, luke2102. I had the idea first, so take his advice, Joju.

I'd unbank the turnaround if i was you, i think this looks better. Also, don't show us every single thing you build! It's good so far though...

This looks very good, Joju! Your style is not the stereotypical NE parkmaker style, but it is very nice and has a good atmosphere. Your park reminds me of Tyandor's park. Take a look at his topic and you'll see what I mean. You two should do a joint park. It really looks like you're having fun with this.. so keep it up.

Great Job, keep it up! this will look great once done so all I can really say is keep going. go go go, don't stop. hope ya get the point.

and i'd proboly unbank the turnaround, unless the train is going faster that about 30mph. overwise, good!

I am assuming that because it's a "racer" coaster you will be putting in another track for the first coaster to race. The park is looking good, definately a beginning style, but it shows promise.

i unbanked the park of the coaster it looks better now, thanx, i look for a thread of tyandor's park, lets see ^^

an thanx all for the good ciritsm, stay tuned

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öhm, i watched tyandors (or something like this ^^) park and i think i am not so good as he, he build amazing detail. but if you think ... ok ^^

Three things:
-unbank the turn-around (as already said)
-don't make the turn-around symmetrical
-remove the catwalk. The wooden coaster has it already in rct.