(Archive) Advertising District / Realto Bay

^^It's a balcony, it's meant to be floating. That's what they do.

This all shows a definite improvment on your previous work. You are doing the thing that everyone gets wrong sometime or another. Showing everything they do. Don't show as many screens! Leave something to the release.

gotcha! i kinda figured i was giving too much away! thanks for the tip!