(Archive) Advertising District / Realto Bay
- 28-February 04
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Richie Offline
Put some barrels on the balconies, they look plain. A window new to the door at the very bottom could help too. -
Panoramical Offline
Ok, it needed a makeover, so that's exactly what it got! I think it looks better now
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jon Offline
Wow...what a turnaround Pana. Your architecture skills are improving and I'm beginning to see clear inspiration from deano. Keep it up. Just remove some of those barrels though, they really kill it. -
Corkscrew Offline
You know my thougts about it, Pana, pretty good stuff! The only thing that could use some improvements is the guest service building, I'd say ; add some tiny ones next to it and use some towers. Except that, looking nice -
super rich Offline
I like the style of the buildings they are simple but nice, well maybe a couple more objects on the balconies and it would,lok pretty nice. -
Panoramical Offline
thanks everyone for your feedback. i will try my best to show you the mine train coaster before the end of today! -
Panoramical Offline
Ok, just finished the Mine Train, Mine Train of Disaster (named after the area, Mines of Disaster). I'm just starting the entrance to the ride now. Here are some screens of it in action.
Hope you like them -
Skylor Offline
He took my words. =)beautiful.
you've improved immensely, and i hope you continue to also.
Good job. I like it alot.
Can't wait to get my hands on it. -
Richie Offline
I think the barrels on the far balcony would look better into the corner, instead of randomly in the middle. The balcony on the right looks like it could do with a plant on it, or something. If you have the 1/4 capped support use it as a plantpot and put a normal bush onto it.
I really like the look of that mine train, it looks very promising indeed. How long does it go on for? -
Panoramical Offline
ahem...
Just wanted to put one more update before the next. Well, it's not really an update, but hey.
I will ensure that there will be two more updates, which will be the Station to the coaster, and one other thing i haven't decided yet. After that, I will be going into a new theme. Enjoy -
Panoramical Offline
Ok, I'm sorry I'm churning out the updates and posts a bit too much, but i thought I'd post one more update for this area, then I'll post a couple once i finish the next zone (which is circus themed). It's the station of the coaster...
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JKay Offline
Cozy atmosphere there pano....nice work...I would play with those short grey fences on the roofs...but other than that, its nice....keep it up! -
Pym Guy Offline
It has a very nice mine-ish atmosphere. Nothing really special, but I mean, it's way better than what you've done in the past.
If you keep it up and keep on improving, you'll be great in no-time. -
Richie Offline
This is very picky i know but theres 2 things i want to point out. People may disagree but oh well..
In the 2 red circles, all off the barrels/wood and facing the same way, change one of them so they are facing the 2 different ways. (My view, others may dissagree)
In the yellow circle, it looks like the balcony is floating? If you have any objects that you make a post from, i feel it would look better, going down into the shrubbery. (Again thats my opinion.) -
Panoramical Offline
ok, thanks for pointing that out!!! should be a screen of the entrance to the circus area by the end of tonite. :scarface:
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