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  • Richie%s's Photo
    Put some barrels on the balconies, they look plain. A window new to the door at the very bottom could help too.
  • Panoramical%s's Photo
    Ok, it needed a makeover, so that's exactly what it got! I think it looks better now ;)

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  • jon%s's Photo
    Wow...what a turnaround Pana. Your architecture skills are improving and I'm beginning to see clear inspiration from deano. Keep it up. Just remove some of those barrels though, they really kill it.
  • Corkscrew%s's Photo
    You know my thougts about it, Pana, pretty good stuff! The only thing that could use some improvements is the guest service building, I'd say ; add some tiny ones next to it and use some towers. Except that, looking nice :)
  • super rich%s's Photo
    I like the style of the buildings they are simple but nice, well maybe a couple more objects on the balconies and it would,lok pretty nice.
  • Panoramical%s's Photo
    thanks everyone for your feedback. i will try my best to show you the mine train coaster before the end of today!
  • Panoramical%s's Photo
    Ok, just finished the Mine Train, Mine Train of Disaster (named after the area, Mines of Disaster). I'm just starting the entrance to the ride now. Here are some screens of it in action.

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    Hope you like them ;)
  • Pym Guy%s's Photo
    beautiful.

    you've improved immensely, and i hope you continue to also.
  • Panoramical%s's Photo
    ^thanks alot, i'll try my best!
  • Skylor%s's Photo

    beautiful.

    you've improved immensely, and i hope you continue to also.

    He took my words. =)
    Good job. I like it alot.

    Can't wait to get my hands on it.
  • Panoramical%s's Photo
    once again, thanks! it seems all my hard work has finally paid off!
  • Richie%s's Photo
    I think the barrels on the far balcony would look better into the corner, instead of randomly in the middle. The balcony on the right looks like it could do with a plant on it, or something. If you have the 1/4 capped support use it as a plantpot and put a normal bush onto it.

    I really like the look of that mine train, it looks very promising indeed. How long does it go on for?
  • Panoramical%s's Photo
    ahem...
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    Just wanted to put one more update before the next. Well, it's not really an update, but hey.

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    I will ensure that there will be two more updates, which will be the Station to the coaster, and one other thing i haven't decided yet. After that, I will be going into a new theme. Enjoy :)
  • guljam%s's Photo
    Nolimit topic.
    --------------- :D

    If weather is rain, very nice.
  • Panoramical%s's Photo
    ^do you mean it's dull? well, it is a mine...
  • Panoramical%s's Photo
    Ok, I'm sorry I'm churning out the updates and posts a bit too much, but i thought I'd post one more update for this area, then I'll post a couple once i finish the next zone (which is circus themed). It's the station of the coaster...

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  • JKay%s's Photo
    Cozy atmosphere there pano....nice work...I would play with those short grey fences on the roofs...but other than that, its nice....keep it up! :)
  • Pym Guy%s's Photo
    It has a very nice mine-ish atmosphere. Nothing really special, but I mean, it's way better than what you've done in the past.

    If you keep it up and keep on improving, you'll be great in no-time.
  • Richie%s's Photo
    This is very picky i know but theres 2 things i want to point out. People may disagree but oh well..

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    In the 2 red circles, all off the barrels/wood and facing the same way, change one of them so they are facing the 2 different ways. (My view, others may dissagree)

    In the yellow circle, it looks like the balcony is floating? If you have any objects that you make a post from, i feel it would look better, going down into the shrubbery. (Again thats my opinion.)
  • Panoramical%s's Photo
    ok, thanks for pointing that out!!! should be a screen of the entrance to the circus area by the end of tonite. :scarface:

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