(Archive) Advertising District / In need of a name...
- 17-January 04
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-coasterdude556- Offline
Yeah, New 80x80 LL park, I am just doing this to work on my LL skills. Nothing special may even suck but still... Tell me watcha think, heres the first screen-
A picture of a waterfall with some archy. Second pic-
Same thing except a different part...
So there you go, give me comments, and remember this is my first LL park.
Oh, and sorry about the quality of the pics... -
mantis Offline
I like the waterfalls, and I like the way the buildings are shaping up. Are those arches you have at the water level supposed to be windows or places through which the water flows? Cos you could move them one height level down and then it'd look like water was going through. Depends on what they are, though.
Nice landscaping/water use, though! -
Silenced Offline
I can see so little but the creativness is there. Not something that hasnt been done before but it looks nice. -
intamin101 Offline
I actually like it a lot. Its nice. I'd have to wait to see more of it, because a lot of the time its the way you execute a change in land height that makes or breaks it. It does look promising, just show more of it. -
super rich Offline
I think the waterfall look good but it is very original these screens and nothing to special about them. -
-coasterdude556- Offline
Update:
First screen of a new section:
Next screen
Last one!
Comments Please??? -
Silenced Offline
Wow. There's a bit of a lack of windows, but the architecture is beautiful. I like the fact that the buildings are right up on the coaster. Good way to use space up. -
-coasterdude556- Offline
Really??? ^ Oh and knuckles, Thanks, I cant really put anymore windows in without making hacking... And my hacking skills aren't so great... -
JKay Offline
Thats a badass bridge!....love the water theme pics....quality work, but as said above, incredible archy maybe lacking a few more windows....wish my practice parks were that good..keep it up! -
MightyMouse Offline
The bridge looks cool with the stacked barrels over it. The abstract building, off to the side, looks nice too.
The only real thing(s) that are disturbing me are, I only see two trees. Try mixing in more trees. Change the pink to 'blood red' and it'd look alot better, in my opinion and mabey fiddle with the colors of the flat rides.
The rest looks good. -
Fatha' Offline
You left the simulator pod uncovered, now it looks like the NASA space shuttle is flying through medieval-town or whatever the section is named. Also, why is the inverter ship blue? Is it supposed to mean something, or did you just throw it in for color variation (If for the latter of the reasons, then bad choice). So far it looks a'ight, bridge is nice, theming is ok, foilage.... could be better but its ok. Im only giving you this score due to the pod mishap (maybe you can explain this?) and the color problem...
5/10 -
guljam Offline
stack the wall Nice hack!
Water Fall is almost realistic and steel cave(?) is good idea! -
Ablaze Offline
Change the ship colour to fit with the theme a little, browns/yellows. Cover up the Pod like Fatha said and I think it will be ok. Take photos when it's not raining next time. -
mantis Offline
Dude, your hacking skills look good from where i'm sitting - that stacking's really great.Really??? ^ Oh and knuckles, Thanks, I cant really put anymore windows in without making hacking... And my hacking skills aren't so great...
I agree on the pod/ship - maybe make the ship a more fitting colour, and at least cover the pod with a wooden roof or something.
The trees, too, could do with revising, but apart from that it's really great - it's annoying that you're good at LL as well as rct2
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