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A new park I started in place of 'Hangar 18' (for now, at least) as I wanted to do something I hadn't generally done before, but anyways here's some of the entrance/unamed theme.

Suggestions/contructive criticism/whatever is appreciated

Very unique parkmaking, but those statues supporting those wood paths dont look right....and I dont know how to say it, but there seems to an overall theme missing from your screen so far....keep up the work, definitely will look for updates.

It looks very nice. I'm even liking the tall skinny trees for once.

I think rapids ride steps look better than path slopes in almost every situation and would be nice here. That line between the paths on the inclines just looks sort of ugly to me. The colors are nice though and there's just the right amount of hacking to create the look without getting in the way. It's all very controlled and restrained which is nice to see. I can't wait to see more. We've got to stick together and keep LL alive.

PS - This is for everyone, not just you Spiderman. Someone, anyone, post a screen of a coaster. Please. I'm begging you. I like the buildings and trees. I like all the effort that people are putting into theming. I just want to see a coaster every once in awhile. A good coaster. Is that too much to ask? Is it? Please. Anyone.

Looks very nice, something away from your other work. Good job.

I think it's wonderful. I dunno, maybe even posix will like it, it has a wonderful natural feel. I think the green paths are perfect for the section. I have no suggestions, other than not to stop until you finish.

What!?
No abstract buildings?
This can't be yours.

On a lighter note- It looks very good. Its very crisp, and clean looking. I like the mix of marble and brick textures too. The pink flowers seem to give the atmosphere a boost and I also like the tree combonation.

Dont use path on every roof top though and like Coaster Ed said earlier, try using the rapids lift as stairs(just to add a little psaz), rather than the grey inclined paths.

Overall, Its not Spidy style but I like it. It looks like you've got a good start, so don't bail on this one. Finish it.

I don't know how you managed to get all those textures to work together - but they do! Great job. I never like that fat white fuzzy tree, but I guess it looks ok.

Nice, dude.

(Ed - coasters are SO last century )

Im not one to write long posts but here we go:

I think it looks like an entrance plaza in general. I can't see any particular theme just yet but i do love the architecture, lanscaping, and the tree selection. The tree selection kind of fits in with this area.

I never like that fat white fuzzy tree, but I guess it looks ok.

Thats not a fat fuzzy white tree, it has a name. Its called an Arizona Cypress because Arizona is cool like that.

The arcitecture is really amazing. It feels to me like it has a roman and urban theme stuck together and it worked. I never thought I would see so many different elements and themes stuck together. I feel the egyptian pillars working in that screen along with the urban and roman styles that I see in there. I like to look and try to find new elements or something I have never seen before. You captured it well

The lanscaping blows me away. It looks like it would be hell on the peeps legs but the hills in between the buildings really set off a mountain feel, but without the forest theme we usually see on a mountain.

This screen was very amazing to look at but capturing all of the elements used may take more than a glance, so everyone don't look then post.

My overall rating would be a 9.75 out of 10 because I feel the entrance style in it, when it seems that was not intended.



knuckles

Now here is something I really like. I love the structures. They really show what good work you can do. I like the fact that it doesnt look rushed together. It looks like you actually took your time to build the buildings. I dunnoh why, but that scheme is also captivating. And I was always a fan of the egyptian pieces used for supports. They look good. Nice work.

Time for a new screen. This one of the still unamed flying coaster in the Egypt section, and the colors are not final, too. Any color suggestions or suggestions period are appreciated.

Unamed Flying Coaster


Image, just maybe it will show up...stupid webshots...

Can't really comment on the color, don't have much to base that on...but the colors you chose aren't terrible....looks like a decent coaster layout...good work there, but I think your tree selection is so-so however.

Very nice. Don't change anything.

The 1st screen is nice, realistic and good. Use Ed's suggestion I think, steps would look cool. The flyer looks alright, the treeing is good and the layout is nice, maybe a bit plain around the water. Some grey rocks maybe?

But it's good, a nice change for you.

Not keen on the 90 degree water edge, but apart from that it's lovely. Walls on that path incline might stop people falling off the cliff, though

Nice!

I'm suprised you don't like the colors. At first glance I thought they were terrible, but when I looked closer, I actually thought it flowed with the section. I guess you could do a little more with the paths though, they just seem a little bland.

Overall, b-e-a-uetiful.

Well i think the colours should be changed but oh well looks a good layout from the screen

I think that the coaster's colors are great and its good to see that you arent a 1 trick pony with action zone type work.

Another screen, this time of the station and a few buildings.

The lower building in the last screen. It's good. I dunno but the park seem to be a bit bland. I don't know what though. So ya...


Neva

Maybe you should add another texture in the architecture in this area. Maybe another color might brighten it up and make the buildings pop out more. Right now they are just sunk into the ground, or atleast thats what it looks like. The architecture is like a giant rock to me. I'm just not feeling the good pop of color I got from the first screen. Just work on a bit of color (but not too much) and a bit of texture to add into there.

7/10