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Well.. After Posix sent a workbench this park started. I have four screen for you. Since this is my first 1st park. I'd like all the help i can get. ^Project Milestone^ Is here. Tell me if it's good or crap. And tell what i need to make it better. I'm planning to have 7 or 8 coasters in this park. So..

Screen 1: The Entrance WHOOPS! fOGROT screen.

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The entrance:

The entrance area:

Twisted, a steel coaster:

It's very bad, sorry. The architecture is just blocks of land, and there is next to no foliage. Where there is theming, it is too random, and ugly. I would suggest looking and taking inspiration from all of the spotlights on the main page, and learning how to make a themed area, with continuity and atmosphere.

The last screen for now, A closer view of Twisted:

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oh~ It looks not bad
keep it up!

Like turtle said, there is no atmosphere in your park. Your theming is all over the place. I would suggest picking one theme (castle, roman, alien, water...etc) and sticking with that one theme either throughout the entire park or in large separated sections of the park. The Twisted coaster design looks alright, but as you may find out, its easy to design a coaster but not nessecarily easy to theme it. Please dont give up though....you've got some potential...

As i said this is my first RCT1 Park shown. And it's been a long time since i've played it. I was thinking about making a RCT1 park, so i did with this. I have lost some of my RCT1 Skill. But I will keep trying.
More screens tonight or Friday.

~TID

These screens are rushed out... they're nowhere near complete and they need to be... so instead of posting more screens tonight, post them at the weekend, and spend time making sure the park is as good as it can be before you do so. That way you will get more positive comments and constructive advice.

Sorry. But that has to be one of the worst things iv'e ever seen in RCT. The architecture is just raised land with paths going through it. There is little to no foliage, there is no atmosphere whatsoever. Scrap it, look at some parks here on NE and see how the pros do it. Then try to interpret those ideas into your own. Then post a screen, it'll take time but in the end, it'll be worth it.

Start Again. Think before adding scenery, and you need more architecture in there. It's simply too random. What is your theme, i can't quite work it out. and the theming on your coaster is appalling. You should look at some RCT masterpieces, and take some ideas.

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I ain't that good at RCT1, I'm alot better at RCT2. Since it looks bad, I'll will really try to work hard on this park.

~TID

Well then... If your better at RCT2 then work in RCT2. Im used to be pretty good at RCT1 but then I bought RCT2 and I cant make anything decent in RCT1 anymore (not that I can in RCT2 either, lol)

What Im trying to say is stick to your strengths. Make something in RCT2 and take your time. You need to put bags of time into a park to make it look good. You should at least try to make each building to the best of your ability and dont rush it. Quality is much greater than Quantity

I thinking about still making this park. But making an RCT2 Park with it. So it will be a park for RCT1 and for RCT2.

~TID

Well done.

Sorry i dont think it looks good therer is no lanscaping and i dont like your archy.

Quite honestly, I find it very nice.
He surely has an original style and I find it extremly LL-ish and classical. That's probably what I like about it.
This could never be done in RCT2 that way and so all of you guys don't like it, I suppose.

TID, I find it very interesting. You need improvement, that's no question, but your basics look like you have talent and I really am curious what quality you might come up with if you stick to LL.

P.S.: "Project Milestone" is kind of a courageous name for a project when you're not too overly good at the game, don't you think?

Posix, I know it's kinda courageous name. I just couldn't really think of one. I know i need some improvement, but i am really working on it my LL Skills. Thanks, For thinking that it looks nice in your opinion.

Maybe, new screens later tonight or Friday.

EDIT: I am not going to have an RCT2 park with this. Sorry.

~TID