(Archive) Advertising District / Bayfront Park
- 12-December 03
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Panic Offline
I say, get rid of those diagonal steel crossbeams.
It's interesting. I don't know what this whole "could easily collapse" thing is about. I think the tower looks fine.
Maybe you should make another entrance, one for day-trippers, and have the hotel for hotel guests.
Now that I've applauded your work that has been based on your concept, let me state my problem with your concept:
Key Biscayne, as I remember it, is a national park, or at least part of it. It's meant to be a respite from the chaos of Miami and Miami Beach, something a little more refined. If you want to make a hotel based on Key Biscayne, make it one or two stories, without any towers.
You seem to be working well with the concept you have, but I'm just not sure about the concept. -
Kumba Offline
no its not based on the national park, the area that the real Bicentennial Park is at, is in downtown among lots of much taller buildings, and did i ever say the hotel was the main entrance?Key Biscayne, as I remember it, is a national park, or at least part of it. It's meant to be a respite from the chaos of Miami and Miami Beach, something a little more refined. If you want to make a hotel based on Key Biscayne, make it one or two stories, without any towers.
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Tech Artist Offline
Still looks a little bulky but good job. It is starting feel miami to me but it could look more city like.
I do like the building at the bottom right in the 1st screen it looks very realistic and city like. Good Job! When can we expect rides? I want to see those! -
Steve Offline
ok, those last 2 screens show just how amazing Kumba's foliage selection is, cuz it just flat-out r0cks! its quite nice if u ask me, and acually has a homey feel to it, which is nice, and the smaller building there is pretty neat-0 too...
great work man, it strays away from your smaller building type which is good, keep it up!
bring on da coasters -
Kevin Offline
It looks o.k. but it doesn't amaze me. I think its a little plain in detail and I'm not really fond of the colors. I thought your entry from NEPT looked better in my opinion. I would suggest putting in some fountains and waterfalls. Imagine what the park would like as a peep. add in stuff that will make them (us) happy, like scenery that will make them awe in amazement as they will walk through increadible midways or atmosphere. Looks nice overall though.
Kraken -
Leighx Offline
im still loving it.
the roofs look fine, but there is a few to many pirate walls.
otherwise coming along good.
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artist Offline
Yeah its very nice i like it alot but i would say on that long tower bit add another balconie.
Keep it up..
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jon Offline
It's nice but not the best. They really do like they will fall down at any time. Also that tower needs a blacony or something to give it less of an rct2.com-ish look. -
\/\/33/\/\an Offline
Nothing new really and the hotel needs a few more balconies, maybe a bit more detail here and there. Also make the entrance to the hotel more like hotels usually have, a rather big one with waterfalls decorating it somehow. Just a few thoughts. -
Marshy Offline
That second pic on ths page is reall, really ugly. So Boring.
Add more balconies and stuff -
Kumba Offline
rctfan1556 - Trust me i want to get to the rides ASAP, but i got some scenery makeing to do, btw i need a bit of help with that, if anyone has a program that can flip screens or rotated them at less then 90 deg. i could use your help, coz i aint got any photo progames other then Microsoft paint
steve41 - Glad you like the foliage, its the same mix i see in palnters around town (and i do live near downtown miami) and btw the round gray things are lighting for the plants.
Kraken - Oh you will see fountains and waterfalls, i had planned a waterfall in front of the entrance, but was a bit to low on space. later on im sure i will get some mixed in their.
jon - Fall down? its a sturdy building, and if anything does happen at leased you warned me
Marshy - My new goal is to make you think my stuff is Boring
New Screens in a day or 2 -
Kumba Offline
UPDATE
Ok i got new pics and some news on this park
I now have 3 confirmed guest builders:
cBass
VooDoo
and NemesisChris
all that plus a corkscrew coaster made by Fatha' as far as what these 3 will be doing im not reddy to say yet, but me and cBass have got a littel plan for am awsome Structure, and the others im not sure yet.
Here are the new screens, first one is of a mall i did, i have been trying to make a outdoor mall for so long and i think i finally put the one in my head into RCT, the other pic. is of a food court.
Enjoy. -
artist Offline
Screens look nice.
Your using alot more colour now which is great i love all the little gardens and water jets.
The last screens reminds me of your IWV which is a good thing.
keep it up and i hope to see different colours in different areas.
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rK_ Offline
i like the new screens but with all of them i dont really like the hedge fences on the rooves, the architecture is excellent and so are the colors, nice work -
sloB Offline
Do you use any color other than dull red?
The screens look good but vary your color man. -
Kumba Offline
sloB and chris you both have a good point about the colors, you both tested IWV (Iron Wood Valley) and yes this is like that archy wise, i did add color tho, the green and voilet are not in IWV, and i know its not very new (i think the mall is tho) but in other areas you will see some very original stuff, i just wanted to do something i knew worked.
also i tryed alot of colors for the rooves, but when zoomed out the red look the best. -
Kevin Offline
Looks good Kumba. This is looking a lot better but I still think there are a few things that look....weird. The first screen looks nice but I think the different colored rooves look terrible. IMO, I think the rooves should all be one color. Which color you choose doesn't matter to me. The second new screen you have shown I think is the best screen you have shown so far in this park. It has nice atmosphere, colors, and layout. The only thing I don't like is the steel lattice walls on the balconies. They remind me of prison cages but they do go well with the building, so I'm not sure what to say on that. The gardens/shrubbery is what I like most so far in this park. It gives it a good look and just looks nice overall.
It's getting better Kumba. Nice job.
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JKay Offline
Simple, yet effective archy with unique choice of colors, and the imMense size of the entrance bldg is eye catching alone. Absolutely beautiful landscaping.....the only thing I dont like is the bush fences on the balconies of your buildings....other than that it is AMAZING!!!
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