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This looks like it's gonna be one good area. Personally i don't care if it isn't original(although what is these days) since you have ED's permisson to use that style and your gonna add in your own ideas and stuff anyway, so i don't see why any one really cares about it being original. I look forward to more screens!

UPDATE: park more then Half Done (53%)

Ok i have now finished all my areas in the Hurricane Highlands, these will be the last screens (onless NC posts his mine train pics, witch he can do)

this is the entry area to the rapids, a small eatery, and a bit of the bemmer...



this is the Station for "Hurricane" and the small mall next to the station.



Erwindale Village pics very very soon.....

First screen is great, I like the supports and the turnaround.

I think you could have executed the second screen's station a bit better, but I like the concept for the start of the ride.

NO words! for it! just keeping my mouth closed! because atherwise my touhng will fall out!

GREAT JOB! whene is the release? :-P (just Kiddin´)

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Don't show us the whole park just to get a bunch of replies in your topic.
And frankly I've seen enough of that coaster!
Oh and that wooden building, it IS a bit random.
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Don't show us the whole park just to get a bunch of replies in your topic.
And frankly I've seen enough of that coaster!
Oh and that wooden building, it IS a bit random.
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i aint trying to spam this topic or post the whole park, its just a big park and to be honest in the past i have shown more stuff in a park then this. this park is really big so id guess that would = alot of replys and more screens.

i plan to cutdown tho, i think i need to keep more under raps, altho i think im doing a good job of keeping a good number of stuff un-seen in the park. 4 or 5 screens per section ok?

I would think that you would want the place to look like it had been hit with a strong hurricane, in which right now it looks as a couple of wind gust hit select buildings in the area. If you want it to actually look like a hurricane, have halves of rooves and walls blown off of buildings. Have random scenery blown all over the place, and maybe even scatter rapids in the water (make sure they are heading in the same direction unless the hurricane is the size of a tornado). have paths deleted carefully to look like they were ripped from the ground. Maybe do some hacking to get a rapids boat on top of a building, or some floorless cars or something. You have the right idea in that you know what direction you want to take this in, but the way you built everything is very inconsistant, especially with all the buildings excluding the station being perfectly in-tact. You got the architecture and rides down, now its time to make sure the theming is accurate and makes sense, because right now is like a time travel movie that has many loopholes in its plot.

Of course this only applies if you're trying to create a park that would spend lots of cash on theming; if its meant to be only lightly themed, then its fine as is, but I don't think that was your intention. Try to make it like a park would theme an area to a hurricane, not a few wind gust but not an actual hurricane either. About the screens, I think you should do max of 2 per section and leave the rest to the imagination, but thats me.

Still looks good but do what Phatage said. This area should look like a strong hurricane hit it and not some wind gusts that hit some select buildings as Phatage said. I look foward to more screens of this park.

Instead of having small damage throughout, you should have random small damage, some completely undamaged, and a few completely ruined areas...maybe roped off areas dead end paths...ect.

looks really nice. One complaint...

you spelled search wrong. You spelled it Shearch

looks really nice. One complaint...

you spelled search wrong. You spelled it Shearch

Spelled? Dont you mean spelt?

It's spelled spelled.


With all you've posted, I still can't believe it's still at 48%.

55% now i think. i know i just posted one but another screen should be up soon

UPDATE

Ok heres the first of a few Erwindale screens. What your looking at is a mix of ideas me and Ed had, I came up with the idea to do an arena where insted of watching a stunt show or play you go and watch a game, not only do you watch but you sit in colored sections and bet on the raceing fairy's (Eds idea) that match your sections colers. and bet takers walk the rows to make sure you pay (you get tokens to bet with from the kisos when you enter)



Enjoy

its a great idea really, and the colors are nice and all, but the angle is really ruining the screen for me. dunno why, but its just not working for me.

its okay i guess...

GREAT idea guys... No suggestions here...

UPDATE

Ok heres the first of a few Erwindale screens. What your looking at is a mix of ideas me and Ed had, I came up with the idea to do an arena where insted of watching a stunt show or play you go and watch a game, not only do you watch but you sit in colored sections and bet on the raceing fairy's (Eds idea) that match your sections colers. and bet takers walk the rows to make sure you pay (you get tokens to bet with from the kisos when you enter)

Enjoy

This looks like it will be an interesting area. I like what you have so far but the side/bottom left(part near the railroad
) looks kinda bland, maybe some interesting buildings or scupltures there will help.

I think for this area to be successful at all, it has to look better than Erwindale
becuase it has no creativity at all really.

So far, I think its worse. Its not bad, but there should be much more foliage,
especially to hide the linear paths, as Ed mentioned.

Well I think this looks something that would be in the waterpark area.

It looks all the same... same colors etc.