(Archive) Advertising District / Busch Gardens
- 12-December 03
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deanosrs Offline
As a screen, I really like it, but I'm worried this park is getting repetitive... the this and the last area look too similar.
I agree with gymkid about the circular windows, also I don't like how the green/yellow strip goes all the way around the building on the left and where you've used landscaping in paths, it needs some fences to go with it.
Otherwise it's more of the same... that is, some very good shit -
Jellybones Offline
Instead of a fence like these people are talking about, I think it would look better with benches on the paths around the little landscaped areas. But overall, the screen is wonderful. -
artist Offline
Yeah deano you are very right it is getting a bit repetitive but i am trying to varie the areas as much as i can.
I will take that in too mind alot now thanks man.
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cBass Offline
That's the most elaborate restroom building I've ever seen! Does Jesus shit there?
Nice screen. Add fences. -
Jellybones Offline
Hahahahaha. I can see that on a billboard, advertising some disgusting truck stop/rest stop in I-95 in South Carolina or Georgia or something.
"Jesus shits here!"
Or maybe, "Jesus shat here!" -
Turtle Offline
Looks lovely, architecture is very good, but i don't like those yellow flowers. I prefer the yellow ones that come with the game, with the more defined buds. Apart from that, very hard to criticise anything.
Well done! -
jon Offline
This screen is the best yet. It is very nice colourwise. However, I'm not keen on those quarter tile curved windows, they don't particulary fit in IMO. Apart from that, the colours are beautiful and the park is beautiful. Well done. -
Steve Offline
wow, this park is gettin a shitload of replies. its about to beat mantis' w.o.m.b. once i post i think...
as for the screen chris, looks great, just add some more fences and it'll be perfect... -
artist Offline
Well i think its time for an update some of you may be a little disepointed but the main reason for lack of updates is that i have been very tied up in alot of Geust spots lately and school work.
But i have begun work on BGSA once again i have built imo a wicked mine train layout and now in progress of themeing it the only problem is im themeing in it in pieces so its hard to show a screens i have two screens in this update on of the unfinished entrance to the area and a little teaser of the mine train many thingd may be changed in that screen.
Anyways tell me what you think.
I would like to welcome you all to Iguaza Falls...
Sorry if the images are bad quality.
Thanks.
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Steve Offline
the first screen is my personal favorite. you have a great atmosphere and the fences add to that. nice work with the buildings too.
the second screen isnt totally mind blowing, but its certainly nice, and ive never been a fan of using splash boats of waterfalls, i suggest using some normal waterfalls. great landscaping too.
this park is progressing nicely chris, this will be a park you can be proud of -
Kumba Offline
what happend to the yellow flowers in Iguaza Falls? i really liked them, plus i think the bright green & yellows like very nice mixed like this. the themeing on the mine train is nice but im not to found of the layout (not a first is it, lol), i dont know just something about the stright track on the water. -
ECC Offline
Iguaza?
The first screen needs fences around the squares with plants in the middle of the paths. The second screen needs atleast some supports under the track over the water fall, and get rid of the martian land tiles.
Maybe if you can get a hold of Toon's land blocks you could improve the top of the waterfall. -
Metropole Offline
Nice work
Mine train needs supports, definately.
Splash boats as waterfall are a no no. Been done too many times before to have an effect. What's wrong with normal waterfalls? You can make them much more interesting too.
Finally, in the second screen, there is a bit of land that goes below water level. Raise the water to cover it.
Apart from that, very nice. Great effect, nice and lush and the mine train looks like it has a great layout.
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\/\/33/\/\an Offline
Good work! I understand why you got into rctu, you got some serious talent.
A few things you might still improve in the screens.
1.I dont like those round TT objects being used in the arc. Maybe go with normal walls, it just doesnt look right now.
2.Hopefully you will add something behind the coaster in the first drop. -
Leighx Offline
the iguza screen is really good still.
and the mine train screen is beautiful.
sorry not sure on wat u can change to improve it,
looks fine as it is.
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super rich Offline
Theming looks good but i think the layout could be improved a bit more.
Well done.
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