(Archive) Advertising District / Busch Gardens
- 12-December 03
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artist Offline
I am going to change the lift hill themeing and it will be realistic and well themed.
Oh and intamin101 please sshhhh.
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artist Offline
Hey long time since i updated BGSA mainly due to me going away but i started a new area today i think it may have duelers in but im not sure what type of coaster yet.So im just doing some themeing first.
Here is two little teaser screens they are still unfinished so dont comment on that please.
sorry about the bad quality of the screens again.
Tell me what you think.
Thanks,NC -
deanosrs Offline
I really like this, as I do the whole park. Perhaps could use a bit more colour and a path rethink ( in shape, as well as form) but the buildings are realistic, solid, and well, nice. Keep it going... -
Scarface Offline
I think the blue flowers help the screen a lot. Maybe change the colour of the medieval tents to blue and another colour to fit the colour of the flowers. -
Steve Offline
that looks like slob and voodoo rolled into one, nice work. this looks well worthy of a runner-up... -
Ablaze Offline
Looking nice, I like it how the top of the building is like a walk on roof. That gives it a nice feel, some nice colours going. Using the idea I said or that another area?
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artist Offline
That will be another area,i have that one planned well(i think).
This area will include duelers but im not sure on the type of coaster yet any suggestions anyone.
And yes steve most of this was inspired by Voodoo,slob and john.
Keep the comments coming.
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Turtle Offline
It's nice and all, but i can't help thinking that the large area of flat roof looks a bit out of place. Go for dueling inverts. Or SLCs.
By the way, how did you get those jungle bushes onto the roof? Is it custom scenery? Or a hack? -
ECC Offline
Yeah, Toon made 'em.By the way, how did you get those jungle bushes onto the roof? Is it custom scenery?
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gymkid dude Offline
way to go...very voodooy, sloby, and turtley. I think you should change the tent colors too like adam said. -
\/\/33/\/\an Offline
Well said. It is decent. The building is k, but i need to see more of it's surrounding and how it blends in. One suggestion still, maybe add some sorta supports under those quartertile balconies?that looks like slob and voodoo rolled into one
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Toon Offline
To be honest, these don't thrill me. There are just too many things that jump out at me as not working. I think that you are better than these screens show so I will point out some of the things that are bothering me.
1) The rounded corner window pieces - they are the only use of this wall texture and to me clash terribly with the castle wall texture that is the main texture in use. I really think these should probably be removed, but if your heart is set on them, try to use the texture on some of the flat walls as well.
2) I'm really not liking the cauldron flower pots. I think that if you have to use these they should not be positioned so close to the benches as they just throw the scale off too much, but I would prefer not to see them at all.
3) Your transition from path to building is too straight and flat looking. I would like to see more plants or maybe some treeto addbreak things up. I think it is find to have the path go right up to the building in places, but the one side needs some breaking up. On the side where you have the inset flower beds, it would be nice to see some of these beds jutting out into the path to break up the straightness in places. (hope you understand what I mean).
4) Cattails on rooves are a bad idea...please everyone stop! I'm not generally fond of plants on rooves anytime so you may want to reconsider this as well.
5) It's a small thing, but see what you think of the balconies without the rooves over top. I think that open balconies may look better here. Just a thought tho.
6) I'm the first to jump on the colour police as being ridiculous...but maybe try a different colour than the blood red. Experimentation never hurts.
Still it's good work, it's just that some little tweaks could make it much more visually pleasing. Keep it up. -
jon Offline
I like these screens. There not as good as the others but still nice. The name is good. Also, those balconies need supports IMO, but thats the only complaint I can find. Well done. -
artist Offline
Thank You i wanted someone to tell me what was wrong with the screens i didnt really want "looks nice","yeah great" and im flattered that you say im better than this.
The many things you point out i will try and see how it turns out and btw i was going to change the cauldron flower pots anyway.
Thanks.
NC
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