(Archive) Advertising District / Busch Gardens
- 12-December 03
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artist Offline
I have been working on this project for a couple of months now and i think it is time to start advertising it.
Welcome to Busch Gardens South America.
HockyPersonGuy made the logo btw
This park will have many areas but at this point in time i dont really want to give away alot. The park will include some great coasters exellent landscaping and beautiful scenery ... I hope.
I am already about 70% complete of the area Yosemite. This area is mainly the wooden , western theme. IMO this area has some great landscaping and the themeing is quite good.
The Screens show some of the Yosemite centre and a little screen of a cafe i built quite a while back.
Im keeping most of this area hidden as i dont want to give alot away.
But anyway tell me what you think.
Screens below...
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Janus Offline
First of all, brown 2x2 architecture and those round windows has always annoyed me. It looks ok though, just nothing new. Pretty good treeing. That jagged land in the middle of the little pond in the first screen looks a bit strange, I'd suggest you lower the land and make it look more like a peacefull little island instead of random rocks with trees on. Also a really minor detail, but the ladder on the brick building with the sign that says "paintball" looks a bit pointless. Move it to the left so it looks like you can climb up on the roof from it.
That café is... small. The bush that seems to growing on a block of bricks looks a bit strange. Put some 1/4 white water under the waterfall to make it look more realistic. And is that wooden platform directly next to the waterfall? The floor could get a bit wet...
To the left of the cafe, that cliff wall looks bad.
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artist Offline
The area around the cafe is very incomplete so that will be improved alot.First of all, brown 2x2 architecture and those round windows has always annoyed me. It looks ok though, just nothing new. Pretty good treeing. That jagged land in the middle of the little pond in the first screen looks a bit strange, I'd suggest you lower the land and make it look more like a peacefull little island instead of random rocks with trees on. Also a really minor detail, but the ladder on the brick building with the sign that says "paintball" looks a bit pointless. Move it to the left so it looks like you can climb up on the roof from it.
That café is... small. The bush that seems to growing on a block of bricks looks a bit strange. Put some 1/4 white water under the waterfall to make it look more realistic. And is that wooden platform directly next to the waterfall? The floor could get a bit wet...
To the left of the cafe, that cliff wall looks bad.
Add more colour and perhaps flowers to make it more interesting.
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Corkscrew Offline
Looks good, Chris !
Screen 1 : I like the three variation a lot and there are some nice buildings in this screenshot. Maybe i would have used something else then the little fences on the stone buildings and the wooden next to it (you know, those 2 small buildings next to the Gun Challenge thing).
Screen 2 : The café is really interesting, nice and unique idea to putt it nearby that waterfall, but i don't really like the piece of golden wall. It doesn't really fits with the stones.
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Evil WME Offline
it doesn´t look bad..
the only reason why you won´t get commended on some "good" work is because this is so not your own doing. It´s not just the 2 by 2 being a sin.., it´s the colors and CONSTANT 2 by 2 that makes it a complete rip off, and boring to look at it since there are so many other parks looking just like it. The fatha´ type landscaping isn´t pulled of well, and even when it is it still can´t look nearly as good as some "normal" landscaping. The waterfall looks really nice, on the other hand, and would look better with a bigger building.. my suggestion to you is to experiment, and stray away from typicalness. Find what you yourself like best. I can tell you i despise this style, because it doesn´t look quite as naturally realistic, but as something made in rct to look half decent. Of course you have to make it look good in rct, but while at it, you can make it very natural looking. anyways, i hope this helps a bit.. -
artist Offline
I didnt intend to rip off anyone elses work andit doesn´t look bad..
the only reason why you won´t get commended on some "good" work is because this is so not your own doing. It´s not just the 2 by 2 being a sin.., it´s the colors and CONSTANT 2 by 2 that makes it a complete rip off, and boring to look at it since there are so many other parks looking just like it. The fatha´ type landscaping isn´t pulled of well, and even when it is it still can´t look nearly as good as some "normal" landscaping. The waterfall looks really nice, on the other hand, and would look better with a bigger building.. my suggestion to you is to experiment, and stray away from typicalness. Find what you yourself like best. I can tell you i despise this style, because it doesn´t look quite as naturally realistic, but as something made in rct to look half decent. Of course you have to make it look good in rct, but while at it, you can make it very natural looking. anyways, i hope this helps a bit..
plus this is only this area the rest
of the park will look much better i promise.
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\/\/33/\/\an Offline
I must say it looks good, but why it isnt really that good is, because it has been done too many times. The style of architecture i mean. Ohtherwise the theming and a few cool ideas look great. -
Kumba Offline
its good but i think you need to spice it up a bit. try puting srubs next to the path, trees are never good their. and maybe add some bright flowers to the mix.
its looking nice -
artist Offline
Well most of you are commenting on the Architecture
so i thought i would show you some of the buildings that are around this
area the first screen i showed you was only one part of the area not all the buildings
are 2x2 and very dull and BROWN.
I thought this would be a good screen to show you
i know its incomplete so dont comment on that here
we are i hope you like it.
Btw its a McDonalds.
Thanks keep the feedback coming.
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Evil WME Offline
that looks a lot better =D.
the buildings look very different to be next to each other, but it doesn´t bother me that much..
the red red colors need a change of color schemes but the other ones are kinda nice..
i still can´t say i´m a fan of that landscaping..
anyways, good luck on your project. don´t let the big meanies such as Evil WME get you down =P. -
Scarface Offline
I dont like the windows on the normal walls, but i like them on the brick walls. Maybe change the egyptian walls on that building in the last picture, or remove a few of them so it looks a bit dismantled.
Maybe change the colour of the coaster so its not all that similar to fathas in BGSS.
Doesn't look to bad, just dont use 2*2 all the time.
Dont have high landscaping next to the paths aswell as seen in the last screen. -
Leighx Offline
wow!?!
great archy. i like the mcdonalds cool idea.
are we gonna see any more of the woodie?
coming along perfect .
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Ablaze Offline
Not bad few screens, the buildings look pretty cool to me and you have created a good atmosphere. Well done so far. -
Steve Offline
looks really cool chris. i like the atmosphere of those screens, and the buildings are nice. the cafe is pretty cool too, with the waterfall...show us some rides...otherwise its lookin' good!
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gymkid dude Offline
I agree with darkjanus in the rocky stuff in the pond...it looks violent and unbuschy.
The archy is good in the first 2 screens, but it gets better when you stray from the 2x2 small buildings in the 3rd screen. Nice. -
artist Offline
The jagged land in the water has gone now just thought id let you lot know.I agree with darkjanus in the rocky stuff in the pond...it looks violent and unbuschy.
The archy is good in the first 2 screens, but it gets better when you stray from the 2x2 small buildings in the 3rd screen. Nice.
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Tech Artist Offline
It's good but I'm not really feeling Busch Gardens from it though. Also don't overuse the 2x2. I like the mcdonalds idea.
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