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  • The Dark Knight%s's Photo
    Here is my first park. Unfortunately I have still no name, but I hope he please you so far. About improvements I would be pleased much.


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  • jon%s's Photo
    It looks fairly good for your first attempt at RCT2. The coaster is good but the colours of the architecture are too random.
  • Panoramical%s's Photo
    Random archy, need more trees, random land textures, too many paths in one screenshot.

    Looking good for a first go though.
  • JKay%s's Photo
    Looks good!! The only thing I agree with jon on is your color scheme, I would try to choose one color and use different shades for your archy... :scarface:
  • RaoulXpres%s's Photo
    I actually think the colors are what really make that first screenshot very appealing. Maybe it's the walls thats too random. In that one place you have three pieces in a wall, each a different type.

    great first screen, it can only get better
  • DarkHelmet%s's Photo
    I'm very impressed with this effort. It doesn't look like a first park at all.

    Everything does seem random, but that adds to it, IMO. Sometimes it's refreshing to see themes mixed together to some extent.

    My only suggestion is to remove the part of the Dive Machine coaster in the 3rd screen. If it goes into the tunnel, around the bowties, and returns to the station, that should be good enough for a decent ride. If you do choose to keep the material in the 3rd screen, please put it above ground. In real-life, coasters don't go underground anywhere near that amount.

    Otherwise, the park looks great. Keep it up
  • guljam%s's Photo
    this park is really smooth consept
  • artist%s's Photo
    Yeah this is very good for a first park.
    I say just keep the colours less random and get a better tree selection and all will be good.

    ~NC~
  • Caddie Gone Mad%s's Photo
    I really really like it, the colors and randomness look really good, but one thing to work on is the land color. Maybe try more sand and dirt mixed into there.
  • posix%s's Photo
    Very nice!
    Don't worry about the colours and all, they fit. It has alot of character and an own style. I like that since you don't find that too often lately.
    I hardly see any mistakes so far. And for a first try it shows you're definitely talented.
    Keep up the great work.
  • Ride6%s's Photo
    Doesn't look at all like a first park. Congradulations on that. Remove the grey from the walls and the buildings, they don't work. Prehapse change the "tarmac" footpath to the other. It looks great otherwise. I can't wait to see what you choose for a tree selection...

    ride6
  • The Dark Knight%s's Photo
    So I have allready build something and I hope you like it. About inprovments I am very pleased.

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  • Brent%s's Photo
    Random beautiness. :yup:
  • RaoulXpres%s's Photo
    With your new screens, I wouldn't change a thing!

    I really like how you've made your own style, and pulled it off very well. It really catches my eye, I can't put my finger on why, but it does.

    nice work
  • guljam%s's Photo
    I love this style.. keep in this!
    one special,-> Original Arch.!
  • artist%s's Photo
    Wow im impressed with this screen the colours you have used are perfect and the buildings are pretty cool.
    Looking forword to seeing more.

    NC

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