(Archive) Advertising District / Matihi Beach

Ok. Not really. This might not become an actual project. Yet itr may. I doubt it but maybe. I won't show too much. My other park is like 99% done. No1 probably remembersc cuz it was a while ago.

I just wanna see if this looks good or not. I added benches on to of the towers to give it some flavor I gues. But what do you think?


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maybe its just me, but benches on towers?

Well, it actually looks good. Minus the 1/4 green sprouces, or whatever they're called. But yes, good none the less. Kinda Fatha'-ish, except not as good (no offense, it's just that, nobody can do it like Grinchy can).

I also don't like the bench's on the roof, they're quite pointless.

One last thing, which annoys the **** outta me (and it's not just in your park), please, please change the color of the track used for windows to blend in with the walls. Stands out way too much and takes away the attention from everything else going on in the screen.

That's it. Nice job. Really, can't wait to download this and check the rest of the park out. Best. Work. From. You. Evar.

Looks pretty good, like a combination of Fatha' and RRP. I think it might look a little too much like their stuff. Perhaps this resembelance was on purpose, if so, then try to be more original. The only thing I can say that really bothers me is the "colour" of the windows.

Hmm, reminds me of the older Fatha' style, like that magic carpet ride in one of NE's collabos. Anyways, I'd reccomend taking out the benches, but the rest looks fine, even though it is a bit cliched. The next sections I'm hoping will be different.

Ooo pretty. I don't like the benches on the rooves though.

Your theming is good.

Yay.

Ok. The benches will go. And thanks for all the things. LoL.

Yea, don't worry. This is a small section. Very small. I was trying to get a feeling of SWA. You know the middle island. I think this spot may be a bit crowded so I am going to try and work something out before I post more. Not this screen but u can see right above this path another stretch of buildings start.


)NewEra(

Wat you think?


)NewEra(

I've done the whole paths-over-the-carousel thing and I've never been satisfied with it. I suggest placing a tent over it or something more interesting like coaster themeing, etc. to maake it look better.

Yup, your screen definitely reminds me of Fatha' work.....not saying thats a bad thing.

Yup, your screen definitely reminds me of Fatha' work.....not saying thats a bad thing.

I am, sorta.

I think its too much like other work done by Fatha' and/or RRP. If you develop your own style a bit more, your work will improve tenfold.

Good job nonetheless.

Why do u have a pathway hovering above the merry go round and i aint to sure about the benchs on the towers aswell.

I honestly don't see the resemblance you're talking about, Brent. The colours aren't fatha-ish, the shapes aren't RRP-ish...

Anyway, I think it's ok, but there isn't enough consistency for me. The roof textures seem to be switching a lot, same with the path covers. Also, on that first screen, I don't like the way the tower lines up with the 2x2 behind it, making a weird 'joined up' effect. Maybe off-set it.

I honestly don't see the resemblance you're talking about, Brent. The colours aren't fatha-ish, the shapes aren't RRP-ish...

Anyway, I think it's ok, but there isn't enough consistency for me. The roof textures seem to be switching a lot, same with the path covers.  Also, on that first screen, I don't like the way the tower lines up with the 2x2 behind it, making a weird 'joined up' effect. Maybe off-set it.

Ya, i don't see a resemblense either. But oh well. I'll be finished with this area in like a few more hours of play. Real small islands. 2 of em.

Ya I know mantis. I was gonna change it. Thanks.


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Sorry for the lack of updates. In this entrance area there are two small islands. The first screen is part of the entrance on the small island and if you see it, it may look too compact so I might change it.

The second island I had partially done but I didn't like it so I am reconstructing the whole thing. I now have a theatre or watever you call it. And it looks a lot nicer.

So there should be screens this weekend if not tomorrow.


ERA

looks fatha-ish

definetly looks like something fatha would make

Hey lets tell him something he didn't know...


The style is overused, over rated and monotonous... let us try something original why don't we.

Hyperion

I am liking the benches ontop of the builings. It's different, and unusual, but it seems to fit perfectly.

And as for the looks about the architecture, eventually people are gonna develope styles that remins us of other parkmakers. Just because it looks like someone else's work doesn't mean that they're copying.

The second screen is a lot better than the 1st but still there is nothing that makes you think it's a really nice area. If theres a good ride in there I think it could be interesting but so far it is average.

Good colours though, could have a good atmosphere.

Thanks. And Mort, the second is better than itself?

Here is the new and fixed up first area! Don't get to excited. It's a watershow. Wow.

Lol, I meant the 2nd is better than the 1st, Changed it now.
That screen is ok, not a bad building, I think the land texture needs some grey rocks maybe? Virginia Wheel for some awnings?

Otherwise looking alright.