(Archive) Advertising District / another one by 'different' designs

this is my third coaster design this time not really going for the 'unique' concept.

it is called terracotta and has a different style of running, where it sets off with a lift hill at the speed of 20 mph and that pushes it through the rest of the ride

here is a screenie of a b@rrol roll



Here is a screenie of the cobra roll



and finally for now, here is a screenie of the start and a loop



tips appreciated

Edited by theforceofg2003, 24 October 2003 - 06:27 AM.

looks okay but soem of the supprots look like their not touching"supporting" the coaster? imo? another differnt theme maybe? in stead of spanish!!.

to much RED!!

20mph, lol! .

Needs a few more colors. The buildings look kinda boring to me.

20mph, lol!  .

Needs a few more colors. The buildings look kinda boring to me.

I'm still improving in that area

This coaster looks pretty good! Butt i have to agree with the red, the buildings might use a bit more variation in colors and the cobra roll looks also a bit wide (the track between the two inversions is too large, i would suggest to use some quarter loops and a vertical part for that).

Butt it are still nice screens to watch, keep up the good work

Hello.


Fix the colors...

Excellent ride so far...
Gotta see how it runs.


Raven-SDI
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20mph, lol!  .

Needs a few more colors. The buildings look kinda boring to me.

I'm still improving in that area

Thats good. The coaster looks good though, but make the supports touch the coaster if possible.

It looks better than your other one that you posted. I like the coaster, but the placement of the bushes and flower beds around it seems kind of sporatic. Maybe fill in the gaps and vary the tree selection more.

sporatic

I'm only 13

lol, and I didn't even spell the damn word right. ::: What I mean is that the scenery kind of looks like it was awkwardly placed within the squares. More in the first and last screens tho.

Err, I'm 13 too and I know that word, and English isn't my first language.

Anyway, the coaster looks ok, but I don't like the custom supports nor the architecture which needs more colour.

Err, I'm 13 too and I know that word, and English isn't my first language.

you are intelectually smarter than me then.

Err, I'm 13 too and I know that word, and English isn't my first language.

you are intelectually smarter than me then.

No shit Sherlock.

Err, I'm 13 too and I know that word, and English isn't my first language.

you are intelectually smarter than me then.

No shit Sherlock.

No need to rub it in

*back on topic*