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Hey Yall im a new memeber at this and im really good at scenery and crap.So if u need any help just holla or test me out, what i wanna say is im comming out with my first complete park.%10 Done :scarface: I have my pix now Pictures



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~ Cork
P.S. ~Madness~
My park was looking like this because i was in a bad mood and i was bored as hell, im a moodish-parkmarker when im carlm im good when im hyper im real good when im angry or sad i suck alot so now im in a good mood and im going to change all my mistakes and change my whole park

Edited by MaDnESS, 21 October 2003 - 03:53 PM.

you have to host the pictures externally.

Well, I'll just say that you're overtreeing your park. Your architecture is nothing special, but you have way too many trees. Of course, you could be trying to create a very naturalistic work, but this stuff probably won't appeal to the more advance tastes of this community.

For future references, please post your park advertisements in the forum specifically devoted to that (just above this one).

For your benefit, I'm moving this thread over for you.

Good ol' Corky...

Well I agree with what he said as well. You could also defiitley use some flowers. Yellow would do well.

thanks guys for telling me ill fix my mistakes P.S. Thanks Cork

I really enjoyed looking at those screenshots.

It overjoys me to see somebody actually making a realistic park. The theming could be better, but don't give up on it, it will all come together when you have finished the park. This is a very good effort for your first park, and I look forward to seeing more screens of your work. Keep it up!

Edit: I can't stop looking at these screens. This park has potential. And if you ask corky, anything could use some yellow flowers, but I don't think that's the case here. You may need some more color, unless you're going for an earth tones kind of area with the greens and browns. If you are, then it looks good, but if not, then try to add some reds and yellows, and put some multicolored trim on your buildings (ie; 1/4 height fences, or 1/4 height walls).

The roofing needs a lot of work. Especially where it's slanted upwards at the edges... that's ugly. Other than that, follow the advice up ^ there.

Good work..
Especially house wall color is Á¶È­¼º

I can't pronounce the name of this park.

I can't pronounce the name of this park.

LOL! Me neither...........
Some of the stuff you have there is not too bad. Overtreed like the others said and where youve got windows going straight onto the side of the roof, i dont like. maybe change that somehow.

Turned

And if you ask corky, anything could use some yellow flowers, but I don't think that's the case here.

Hey! What's that supposed to mean?

Ed: Kinda slur "Arwen" a bit.

It overjoys me to see somebody actually making a realistic park.

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i kinde like the screens to, it has a somewhat old style in it, but its a little to old for me, it could use much more colours, the brown and green gets boring after a little while, use some fantasy in it.

nice work though.