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...I think I'll break that promise and try as desperately hard as I can to get some good reognition.


--but not in the way that most of y'all are thinking, I actually just want to be able to post and not have someone flaming me.





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I liked the archy of your park Critic, really bautifful!

Butt the rides their layouts are a bit unrealistic and could use some improvements. I wouldn't place a lifthill on a log flume right after a drop or two invertors while there doesn't happens something special like a splash and the inverted also looks a bit weird.

Butt anyway, it looks overall nice!

some differnt roofs. and red?!!?(not sure)

Critic, not that I'm "Exclusive" park critic, I just have to say that its very nice overall but try not to use so many roofs that are 1 or 2 tiles, and dont put them so close to each other. Besides from that you get my Stamp of Approval and Praise.

I actually just want to be able to post and not have someone flaming me.

Good luck...

Admittedly, I haven't had a chance to download the park and view the whole thing, but this screen is a perfect example of how to overuse brand new objects, and make them look like crap.

I'm usually not quite this harsh, but that's got to be one of the ugliest/crowded/poor entrances that I've seen. This style seen in many LL parks was never a favorite of mine, and this does nothing to change that opinion.

I'll look at the park to give you a fair shake, but let's just say, "I have a bad feeling about this."

On a good note, the name is rather nifty.

Kai

Maybe try using something apart from ToonTowners Spanish Walls and scenery. The word Variation comes to mind

Metro

Just from looking at the pics, I can say that you are definitely improving.
You need more variation though, and the buildings are clumped too tightly together.
Good work though.

You definetly need to add some different wall textures and some roof variation i say too much spainish scenery add some brick or wooden walls in there.



Give it a try and i guarantee it will look 50x better.

Maybe try using something apart from ToonTowners Spanish Walls and scenery.  The word Variation comes to mind

Metro

Since when has variation mattered? *cough* Fatha *cough*

(bringing up old and outdated stereotypes is fun)



Another download release? PINNED

Ya, the spanish theme is the only thing I see in this picture...

Also the paths under some of the open columns look strange.

Apart from the archy looking identical throughout the entire park, the rides suck. The invert is horrible, you definately need work on those. Just look at real rides such as Batman:The Ride, Nemesis:The Inferno, or Talon to get a good idea of what to do in that small of a space. The water ride needs work as well, and you probably could have just buried that one piece of track that is under the glass underground, and put the water on top of that.

I knew I forgot something.


I was meaning to tell you all that with each new park I'm going to release there is a goal.


The goal for Droughted Paradise was to release a park.

The goal for this park was to see what I could do and find as much detail as I can at the moment with strictly one set of walls and rooves.

The goal for my next project is to work on variation and rides, and I'm not sure about the one that'll come after that right now.

So I'm glad that whoever liked it liked it, and I value anyone's opinion that was otherwise.