(Archive) Advertising District / Really not finished screens inside

Yeah well, those pictures are not finished, but I want to know if it is any good.

http://community.webshots.com/bildman







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broken link

yeah link dont work^

same here.

wierd. should work. ok, try this one: http://community.web...om/user/bildman.

Oh. My. God

What the fuck is that?

My thoughts exactly. How about being more careful and meaningful when placing things, not just being totally random.

You can ALMOST find the mediterraen theme wanting to burst out of it...but no. Its not here.

I actually like it but your gonna have trouble building a lot on a slope like that.
It had a meditaranean(sp?) feel, using the white buildings and being built on a slope but your gonna have to keep it to this level to convince me.

1. Delete the top buildings with the roman theming used....
2. Delete the orange and blue building.
3. Everything else is looking good...but fill the whole screen like that and then post again.

it looks......interesting...

its ok, considering how its not really finished yet...but the white dirt paths suck imo...

steve

it looks......interesting...

its ok, considering how its not really finished yet...but the white dirt paths suck imo...

steve

Damn right the white paths suck. Looks like spraypaint on the screen.

Metro

Hello.


It HAS potential to be something...

note the word HAS...


Raven-SDI
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it looks......interesting...

its ok, considering how its not really finished yet...but the white dirt paths suck imo...

steve

Damn right the white paths suck. Looks like spraypaint on the screen.

Metro

Spraypaint paths, LMFAO! .

But seriously lose the spraypaint paths , they look ugly and like a hack gone wrong.

Um and take Scarface's suggustions, don't be so random , and fill the screen.
Other than that, nice start. Better than your last stuff.

Spraypaint paths, LMFAO!     .

its not that funny at all...

I'd comment on your park, but the link is broken.

ok. only the thing that I got suggestions instead of meanless crap is a huge step forward for me. those white paths are ugly, yes I know, but i did want a bright dirt path, and I did one myself. I will remove them. maybe I'll download some good paths instead. blahblah enough talking about that. scarface, I will do as you say (as much as I can). The top of the picture is the entrance to a temple. the ugly roman building will be removed. I try to imitate what I have seen when I have been in greece or to be more exact creta. but I will make those changes soon.

it looks......interesting...

its ok, considering how its not really finished yet...but the white dirt paths suck imo...

steve

Damn right the white paths suck. Looks like spraypaint on the screen.

Metro

Spraypaint paths, LMFAO! .

That wasn't intended to be a joke, it was truthful :::

The screenshot, as Raven said, does show potential. You've started building on sloped terrain, which is good. I suggest you take all of the suggestions people have made, and build on them and the park won't be half bad.

Metro

hello.
I'm blitz, the radar blip.
i LIKE what you have. Not "well" built by any stretch of mind, but atleast it has something that most NE forum-goers don't even consider: elevation. Continue to build on your slope.

Also, get acquanted with your tools a bit more, and try to understand what role color and texture play in a map. Adam is right:

1. Delete the top buildings with the roman theming used....
2. Delete the orange and blue building.
3. Everything else is looking good...but fill the whole screen like that and then post again.

I'd also like to add that the white path isn't working, but keep it around incase it starts to.
... also, make it fun, change that water fall to a log ride

Looks wierd with the colors... like some kind of a wonderland.

my advice is to take scarfaces advice.

It's a good start tho. I mean ya have just started..

quack quack

uuuuuuggggghhhhhh,watch where you put stuff