(Archive) Advertising District / Innovation Works
- 14-September 03
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Jacko Shanty Offline
Looks good. I think the sections with the cleopatra's needles ad the bats are a little too cluttered/symmetical. Also, I'd add some grey brick in there, it seems to be lacking a color. Good work, though. It looks pretty dark and gothic.. what's your theme? Is it like the opposite of Angel's? -
Brent Offline
I don't like it at all, sadly. There's no real sense of direction with the folliage and the fact that there's no landscaping around it makes the screen quite a yawner. Please fixeth. -
rctfreak2000 Offline
The building itself is neat to me, but that tree selection is by far one of the worst I have ever seen. -
IndyJones Offline
I know...I suck with tree selection and landscaping. I'll be fixing this soon.The building itself is neat to me, but that tree selection is by far one of the worst I have ever seen.
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sfgadv02 Offline
Yes, I must agree here......but that tree selection is by far one of the worst I have ever seen.
The building itself looks ok though. -
spiderman Offline
The building is, well, okay. It almost seems a tad blocky, and the center doesn't cut it for me. The tree selection isn't quite good. Try using more 1/4 tile trees instead of full tile trees. -
IndyJones Offline
Alrighty, I restarted my section and here's what I came up with.
Here's the new entrance I hope you like it:
Center of the plaza:
Pics lower.
I hope you like it! -
rctfreak2000 Offline
Now this is great! I love it Indy. The small, yet not overdone, details make this great. -
mantis Offline
Keep it all except the really really REALLY shitty mini-trees. I don't know WHO made those, but they deserve to be shot.
Good work -
IndyJones Offline
Hmm...appears that the bandwidth is out for today...I'll try to find a better host for you guys by tomorrow. Thanks for the comments so far.
EDIT- I got them up on my site so here's the links...you may have to copy and paste.
http://www.freewebs....dyjones/IW1.jpg
http://www.freewebs....dyjones/IW2.jpg -
Kumba Offline
Fuck youKeep it all except the really really REALLY shitty mini-trees. I don't know WHO made those, but they deserve to be shot.
Good work -
Silenced Offline
Oh yes Kumba does need to be shot for those...
Nice screens indy. Nice use of themeing -
\/\/33/\/\an Offline
Congrats Kumba!
I dont like the buildings too much, but the park still has a guud feel in it. -
mantis Offline
*aims*
Fuck youKeep it all except the really really REALLY shitty mini-trees. I don't know WHO made those, but they deserve to be shot.
Good work
*shoots*
*wipes brow*
Now don't make any more! -
IndyJones Offline
Update for the Spooky/Village Map:
I finished off the entrance plaza. So here's a screen. Rides to come soon:
www.freewebs.com/indyjones/iw3.jpg
Indy -
deanosrs Offline
It's ok. I really don't like the paths and the roofs look a bit disorganised in places
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