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I have just started work on a new project, this is my first try at a mega park in RCT so all suggestions are appreciated.

All i have so far is part of the entrance and and a small screen of the archy that will be used with the entrance. CLICK HERE for 2 screens, the first is the scenic portion of the entrance and the second is a small shot of the architecture that will be used with the entrance.

Again, comments and suggestions are appreciated.


-Alienated-

I actually like this.
The first screen is great, i dont know why, it just hit me when i seen it and i thought thats great.
Second isn't showing much but the building seems to have good shape, maybe add some more windows..

good start

I have a new screen for you of the entrance, these screens combined should give you a good feel of how the entrance will be, so expect this to be the final screen of the entrance. Comments and Suggestions are appreciated.


CLICK HERE for my main page
OR
CLICK HERE for the newest pic

thanks.


-Alienated-

I think webshots might be down

edit - back up

The yellow is really good - wooden textures/glass...it's kind of Micool-ish but less beserk On that white tower with the virginia reel awnings, you could move the window up one height mark so there's space between it and the awning...I don't really like windows placed one height mark below their highest possible mark - it annoys me

Good work, but i'm not sure about the turquoise 1/4 tree you're using...I try and avoid them most of the time

I like it. It's tyleish and simple and good-looking. I do suggest that you use more colors. The yellow and brown will only get you so far, and though the flowers help it still needs some flash. The archy is nice, and the scenery is really good with the fountains and the pink flowers.

Ok, I have an update with one screen. Progress has been going slow due to some reconstruction on the entrance but it is beginning to speed up again. I have started a new section that seems to be coming along pretty well so far, it currently has a partially themed Mine Train in it and a slight amount of architecture. Please give Comments and Suggestions, thanks.

Click Here for the new screen and you can see the old screens here.

I dig it... but on the first screen, the large one of the entrance, make the stairs to the lower portion 3 wide, not 1... that just looks strange to me.

I dig the Ferris Wheel. Truely.

On the other side the other screens were great. Good colors, and nice mix of wooden rooves and glass. May I suggest making the Virginia Reels tracks yellow?

Looks good. Glad to also have you on RCTX... keep up the good work.

~Hyperion~

Very nice! You earn a cheap ass flash animation with a dancing guy in a red hat!

^ That's an animated gif not a flash file..

Park looks great so far, I like how the mine ride drops straight down leaving the station. On the first screens, I like the island. Its a differnt approach but I'm not too sure about the random roman/egyption columns together.

Your paths are a bit straight - put some single bushes/trees in there to mess it up a little And that water wheel's a bit of a strange colour

Adix - The stairs are now 3 wide. Thanks

Circéus - I had actually already changed their color but thanks anyway.

Mantis - I had forgot to change the colors, they look much better now, Thanks.


Expect a screen soon, as I am nearly finished with the mine train, I really like how it is coming along. This is by far my best work to date.

Update

I am very close to finishing the mine train this will probably be the last screen of it, i dont want to give too much away. So CLICK HERE for the new screen and the older screens can be found here.

Comments and suggestions are appreciated, Thanks.


-Alienated-

I think the red flowers are a bit bright for the last screen, make them a different shade of red. The mine train looks sweet, and the architecture looks cool also. What are the stats for the Mine Train?

Erm, Marshy, he can't. This is LL.

I think it's nice enough, but your trees are a bit higgledypiggledy. First, they're all bunched up...spread them out a bit. Secondly, use some full tile trees as well as the 1/4 ones. Last, try not to make them line up so much vertically on the screen. I like it, but I think you need to work more on your tree-ing.

Architecture reminds me of Erwindale which is soupy trousers.

Nice work.

there are the stats on the Mine Train


I will do my best to fix the trees, thanks.

Update


The Entrance is nearing completion, and the Mine Train coaster as well. In the entrance i have removed the 1/4 turquoise trees because after i looked at it, it doesn't go right with the yellow and the treeing that will be surrounding the entrance. Below is a screen of some more of the entrance, and now that i am almost finished with the mine train and entrance areas, i need a good idea for the next area, so suggestions on that are appreciated.

You can find all of the past screens HERE




Comments and Suggestions are appreciated, thanks.


Alienated

Update


Finally nearing completion of the entrance area, and the mine train area. Next, I still have no idea what theme i will try. But for now here is an INCOMPLETE screen of the end of the entrance.




Comments and Suggestions are appreciated.


-Alienated-

This looks lovely. Very nice tree selection gives it that secluded feel. Maybe a flower border next to the paths wouldn't go amiss, the trees right next to the paths crowd it a bit.