(Archive) Advertising District / Mythical Gardens

  • deanosrs%s's Photo
    There is definitely a technique in obtaining plenty of posts. Being well known helps, posting complete screens helps, not begging for replies helps, and not posting too many screens helps.

    Anyway....

    The park looks ok. You do occasionally have some nice ideas, but your themes don't seem to flow together too well. Like the trees often clash and don't mix in with the buildings. The coaster track is very bizzare... I'm not quite sure what it's supposed to be. But your basic buildings and colour schemes are, in the main part, quite nice.
  • Ride6%s's Photo
    Thanks. Keep in mind that this park is an experement for me. And the coaster track is gone. Other people didn't like it. Anyhow i have a new screen that i think is the best yet! :p

    enjoy, ride6

    Attached Images

    • Attached Image: Array
  • mantis%s's Photo
    I like the glass atrium thing. I think you should try and mix up the direction in which your roof apexes point a bit more - a lot of them are all pointing the same way.

    I like your pathside theming. This is a good park, but I think you really need some star-attraction or something to really sell it. Otherwise it could easily be a mediocre park rather than a very good one.
  • Ride6%s's Photo
    Don't worry there is a water coaster here with a hacked water drop that should sell as the main attration, it's just built and it has no theming yet so i can't show as of now. New screens of the small GCI woodie should also be up today...

    ~ride6 :p
  • Ride6%s's Photo
    New screen, of the little GCI woodie. I know it's small. This park is low budget (so to speak) and they were also adding the Space Shots that year (2000).

    ;) I always try to make the parks almost seem real...

    Attached Images

    • Attached Image: Array
  • Ride6%s's Photo
    One last screen. The park is now 75% complete, expect release in about one week. The last area of the park i want to keep a secret so i guess that's all. I'll be playing with the Enterprises color sceam, but other that that this area is done. BTW most of it is western... Yeah.

    Attached Images

    • Attached Image: Array
  • deanosrs%s's Photo
    It's still looking quite good, my only comments would be it's hard to see a set theme for an area and you need to cover up the entrances and exits in some way.
  • Butterfinger%s's Photo
    Your work is starting to look very 'promising' (If you catch my drift ;)).



    That is all I will say.




    NO WAIT, looking at the last two screens, I see there is something that I absolutly must adress. That enterprise has no station or themeing on it. "Leave no ride behind" I always say. You should look at every single square of ground and see what you can add to it to make it better. That is the kind of attitude you want to have......... it makes/has made legendary parkmakers.


    Um, in case I strayed from my point a bit at the end there........... add a station to your enterprise :D
  • Ride6%s's Photo
    haha! Butterfinger that is HILARIUS!!! :p

    I think i said too much when we were AIMing each-other the other day. Anyway i'll fix up the enterprise and do a bit of detailing through-out. Thanks for replying you two.
  • Turtle%s's Photo
    Subliminal Message to the above post -

    "Oh my god, Butterfinger, you rule! I can't spell!

    Everyone, look at me! I was talking to Butterfinger! Go me!"

    Back to the topic, looks quite nice as a realistic park.
  • Ride6%s's Photo
    Thanks. Anyhow, i could add new screens in a few hours but i'll need at least three people to ask for it. I don't want any begging around here because even though i'm very excited it still isn't good enough to warrent that...

    ride6 (I'm kinda hopen you'll ask, after all. This next part is probably my best work, ever).
  • gymkid dude%s's Photo
    your architecture is getting steadily better, and your theming is improving as is evident by that western area you have going.

    Your "rides" look like your downfall though, as most of your flat rides are basically the ride, an entrance, an exit, and a queue, nothing more to make it stand out. Your steel mini coaster looks awful, but the woodie at least looks like a good ride.

    So, work on the rides, the theming of the rides. You are getting there with the architecture and atmosphere, so if you get with it with the rides you have a chance at making decent parks one day.

Tags

  • No Tags

Members Reading