(Archive) Advertising District / Park Project
- 05-August 03
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twister2489 Offline
I have been working on this park for a while now. I decided that I would show it here to see what you guys think.
Here are some screens
Tell me what you think.
Twister -
Midnight Aurora Offline
As much as I love the strange curves like the arches in the 2nd screen and the waterfalls in the third, it's a bit too repititous. You seem to be doing the same thing over and over again. Aslo, try to mix up the colours. The bright flowers and cubes are perfect for that, but try to make the walls different (though I absolutly despise the abstract cubes...). Try some whites and maybe a darker brown. -
JBruckner Offline
The irony...looks really cool! too much light brown though.
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Anyways. The park is quite nice actually.
I'm quite fond of the surrealness, it almost inspires me to make a park like this, its great!
I would only suggest to make the foliage more dense to help give it a little more life.
Other than that keep on going and dont let anyone here discourage you. -
mantis Offline
Woah! This is mindfuck!
Can't wait for the release - I want to see this in all its glory.
Great! -
twister2489 Offline
I'm glad some of you like it. I haven't been home today so I didn't get to work on it today. I am planning a coaster that may take a few days to complete. -
sircursealot Offline
This has loads of potential, yet I find it incredibly monotonous. There are many cool and original ideas displayed, yet it is ruined by amatuer parkmaking. Check out some NE spotlights or runner-ups and concentrate only on the colours. Soon you'll find a way to make multiple colours flow. Well, good luck! I await this, and expect good things from you. -
twister2489 Offline
I do have a mini park I finished a while ago. I just released at a few other websites. It is called Volcanica. It was mostly a practice park so I could get better with colors and scenery. It turned out o.k i don't think it was my best work though. If you want to take a look at it, here is a link.
Download - VOLCANICA -
Hevydevy Offline
I like it alot, especially the waterfalls, and flowers, but there are other colors then light brown. Consider using them.
$Hevydevy $ -
twister2489 Offline
New screens
Back view of an entrance to a coaster yet to be named
Front View
Only the station is complete. I still have to theme the ride which might be done tomorrow.
Enjoy. -
FrEaK Offline
I'm not too fond of the first screens you posted...but those last two are looking really good.
// freak -
mantis Offline
How can buildings have so many height differences yet be so cool? That station is really quite something.
Well Done! *grinning due to coolness of park* -
i c ded pplz Offline
Mantis, take a look at it in all its glory at rct2.comHow can buildings have so many height differences yet be so cool? That station is really quite something.
Well Done! *grinning due to coolness of park*
Atlantis: The Lost City -
Coaster Ed Offline
Meh. It's mostly just custom scenery thrown all over the place. Dense can be good but random is not good. Those station building screens above look pretty cool and so does the Volcania mini-park but overall I'm not too impressed by this. I'd like to see more thought and planning and less randomess. That said, it is certainly unique which is always a plus. -
sloB Offline
i gotta agree with ed on this one. it looks extremely sloppy to me and theres way too much ugly custom scenery in there like the rocks and stuff like that. i mean some of its good like that waterfall (but why is it white) but he bad outways the good for me. at least formt he pics -
twister2489 Offline
With the link that Mantis gave, The pics on the first parge have been redone and look a lot better. I might show an up to date pic soon. I've never pulled off this theme before so it is really tough for me since I don't know how to lay out certain things like scenery for this theme. I am starting to get the hang of it. So as this park progresses, the placement of scenery will most likely become better. Practice makes perfect. More screens to come. -
Ride6 Offline
I'm immpressed. Just in ideas there is brillience at work here but the first few screens needed more color. Those last few look great IMO.
~ride6 -
Meretrix Offline
I have only a few suggestions. The one thing that really bothers me about these screens is the fact that those water jets just shoot out into space. For God's sake, make them closer to the water. And while you're at it, when a waterfall actually makes contact with a stagnant body of water, it produces a splash. It certainly wouldn't be too much trouble to put in a small water splash at each waterfall, would it? I really like the shape of the archy so far. I am a bit confused by the plants on the 1/4 blocks at the top of the first and second screen, but this looks to be a fantasy park, so I am a LOT more forgiving. The recent screens seem much better, except for the water jet problem being repeated. If there is a reason for this, please explain, or you can just tell me to shut the hell up.
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