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Screen One
The main entrance to the Island.

Screen Two
Some architecture near the entrance.

Forbidden. Screens don't work.

very nice archy. It is looking superb, actually. The only thing you really oughta change is those brown paths. Multicolored paths in general, don´t add to a park. And a good park is generally ruined by them, imo.

I already commented on the 1st screen, so I'll talk about the 2nd one now.

Like WME said, get rid of the brown paths. I do like the white paths, you should keep them in my opinion.

Please get rid of those knights. I don't like entertainers on top of buildings.

I like the archy alot, but don't play out the broken fences. I like how you're using diffrent kinds of ground were the trees are, and the tress and other scenery themselves go really well with everything.

$Hevydevy $

The first screen is a little boring, not because there isn’t much in it, because it isn’t anything special. Like people said about when I re-did Evil's mine area, it's ok but been done before and hasn’t got enough to make it stand out at all. As for the second screen, it is a lot better and there’s a lot more to it. The buildings are larger and it’s a lot more detailed. Add some benches and lights in their etc and it will look very nice. 1st screen could be improved I think with a little more detail and maybe make a couple of buildings larger.

I'll see what I can make of the entrance Nick . Thanks.

Any more comments or anything. I am not getting much at all. This is my best work ever and I only get what 4-5 replys. I havn't shown anymore because it has been taking me 15+ minutes to load up LL. There will be more soon.

What do you all think about hmmm... Rainwater Falls?

Is that all? I guess I'll quit showing it.

What a Nice!

your hardly showing a lot to attract people to comment on it....

people know u wont finish it so y shud we comment ?

your hardly showing a lot to attract people to comment on it....

people know u wont finish it so y shud we comment ?

Who the fuck are you?


Answer to your question: To motivate me.

EDIT: Sorry, I am on my cousin's name. He was over here and never logged off.

Your not going to get lots of comments if both screens look virtually the same.
And as i stressed in the last post, most people probably aren't commenting as they know the project will be cancelled. So it would be a waste of their energy in their fingers to type something.