(Archive) Advertising District / Awaken....
- 26-July 03
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kà mølæñ Offline
«::BEGIN TRANSMISSION::»
I hope this message gets through to you all. I am among the hunted, pursued like an animal for what I have seen. I have arisen from the shadows to spread light on something that remains clouded in mystery. There are many who would prefer that would not happen, and as such my time among you will be short. This is what I have come here to show you, to awaken you to the truth - behold, what may cause my downfall. I apologize for the quality, but my only chances are at night, with a camera small enough to carry on me without inhibiting my motions. Entering and leaving the compound is possibly harder than breaking and entering the White House, but it is what I must do to bring the truth. My time to leave has come, I cannot stay in one place too long.
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Nitrophobia Offline
The story sounds great. Cant wait for more of the story. I know the screen goes along with the story which is cool but it shows basically nothing. Hopefully the next screen will be taken during the day. Along with the next pic I cant wait for the continuing story..
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mantis Offline
Cool looking invert (even if you could have chosen a better angle....i hate looking at large loops from the 'thin' side) and nice story.
Pity about the username -
posix Offline
How could I be bothered...Slam it in a graphics program and brighten it up.
Anyway. I just turned my monitor's "brightness" to maximum and could actually discover the invert a little.
Looks nice, yes, but doesn't show enough for me to comment. -
Hevydevy Offline
Ooooo, sounds interesting. I'm a little pissed off at you about the screen though.
$Hevydevy $ -
Tech Artist Offline
yup! look very closely in those blue lines i drew in paint, and you will see the invert.[font="tahoma"]Very true.
Now where is there an invert?[/font]
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Drew Offline
It sounds great. I just hope this doesn't turn out like Goliath225's park. (I think that's his name.) -
JBruckner Offline
From what I can see you've got some talent with stories and such and maybe a bit of it rubbed of on RCT.
Anywho, the park looks nice I can see the whole thing on my monitor god LCD's are bright as hell.
There are quite a few things that you can improved upon though.
Always make all of your vending machines inside, right now all of them seem to be outside (normally they are in buildings).
The coaster looks nice also no complaints there.
Um, well, damn. Even with the screen fully visable there isn't much to comment on.
Anywho, make sure you cover everything with buildings.
Oh, and I want more story! -
Blitz Offline
you thought you could hide behind the darkness didn't you? HAH!
anyway...
I like the style with the cascading waterfalls and stuff...
but yeah, vending machines on the INSIDE would work better, like glitch said.
the color choice for the coaster is a bit happy for me, kind of random.
Im assuming that building (its a building right?) is unfinished...
If it isn't you need to do something about the er... roof. More detail.
I really don't see anything that could be called architecture, but I like the feel of the area below the first drop.
Actually, the saving grace of this pic is the paths, not bad there.
Overall, pretty average. -
Adix Offline
Maybe it's just me, but with my LCD monitor that makes this picture bright enough to see.....
I see a lift (white lights), up to a drop that curves to the right... it goes off screen, then it drops perpendicular to the drop.... back the way it came (in regards to the lift), and then a loop.... then it goes up and turns again.
Anyway, not bad.... but what's with all the dark? -
deanosrs Offline
rct3. they released it a week ago and changed the top buttons back to grey.Nice invert. RCT1 or RCT2?
i'll wait until u release a brighter screen with more going on to comment... other than saying the screen needs to be brighter and there doesnt seem to be enough going on. -
Blitz Offline
im with you on that adix.
but i just threw it in Photoshop and turned the levels real high. I can see everything perfectly.
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