(Archive) Advertising District / GameWorldLeader's Creation Topic

Hey guys,

I'm currently working on a smaller scale project and I thought I might get some feedback from you guys while it's unfinished, here are some screens. Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks

-GWL

you don't have to seperate your park into squares and stick a different thing in each square. It has no flow if you do that and looks sort of of ridiculous. Also, why do you have a path going around the border of the park? wouldn't the imaginary guests be bored by the complete lack of anything to one side?

anyway, I can tell you're new and I'm not trying to be harsh. just get down the basics and work from there

This is a common NCSO style I see very often, all the time on youtube video parks (sometimes the result is amazing, and it isn't other times). Just keep on practicing and you'll soon see some refinement. My style of building starting off was much worse. Remember to make your work more flowing though.

With the stalls, move them indoors, they look ugly just put in a small carving in the wall.

(They'll look much nicer if you do so!)

kk thanks for the feedback

Some new screens of a coaster I added to the park, i think it's much better than the rest of the park atm, what do you guys think?







Please leave some feedback, thanks.

-GWL

Use more different types of trees and put brown sand under your paths.

The coaster looks alright but I agree with Faas about the tree's and paths.

ok thanks