(Archive) Advertising District / Frutiger Gardens
- 13-August 11
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mardy Offline
I don't think there is to much brown. It fits perfectly here.
The sign is amazing. I also like the train station. -
highroll3r Offline
yeah, awsome work here. I agree slightly with Chorkiel here though. Maybe colour some fences white or break up the path with some coloured planters etc. -
Liampie Offline
- Dondervogel is één woord
- Buffalo skull is awesome
- Donder Vogel could use a more prominent entrance
- The train station could use a clock
- Both screens could use some colour, but it looks good like this too.
- Awesomeness -
Kenneth Offline
Thanks guys! I can understand that some of you guys think it's too brown, but if I add much more colour, it just doesn't seem as cohesive. I tried colouring the fences and the roof of Dondervogel, but it just doesn't work as well. The plan is to add some path additions with a bit more colour and there's already an attraction behind Dondervogel which is way more colourful, so I don't think it will be a problem in the end.
@Cena: I rather like the station of Dondervogel myself. I know it's simple, but that's on purpose. I used Kumba's roof for the little building, because that object got no sides and the roof seems lighter that way. With a full roof like the main station, the building seemed too top-heavy.
@Liampie: I agree with most of your comments. I know how to spell Dondervogel, but it wouldn't fit on the sign otherwise I know you can ZC two signs together to make a longer one, but I couldn't find a configuration in which showed right and didn't glitch from both sides, so I thought this was the best option. The entrance could indeed be more prominent, I'll have a look at it. A clock for the station already came to my mind, but I didn't find a good combination of objects for it. I'll also have another look at that idea. -
Corey Offline
I saw the first screen, and new that every single screen after it would be amazing. I was right.
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