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  • chorkiel%s's Photo
    Looking good but too brown imo.
  • mardy%s's Photo
    I don't think there is to much brown. It fits perfectly here.
    The sign is amazing. I also like the train station.
  • Louis!%s's Photo
    Its looking good, so much better than your previous work.
  • highroll3r%s's Photo
    yeah, awsome work here. I agree slightly with Chorkiel here though. Maybe colour some fences white or break up the path with some coloured planters etc.
  • Liampie%s's Photo
    - Dondervogel is één woord
    - Buffalo skull is awesome
    - Donder Vogel could use a more prominent entrance
    - The train station could use a clock
    - Both screens could use some colour, but it looks good like this too.

    - Awesomeness
  • Cocoa%s's Photo
    these are some really charming atmospheres. so chill and family friendly, I love it.
  • Luigi%s's Photo
    Great work! I like it.
  • Kenneth%s's Photo
    Thanks guys! I can understand that some of you guys think it's too brown, but if I add much more colour, it just doesn't seem as cohesive. I tried colouring the fences and the roof of Dondervogel, but it just doesn't work as well. The plan is to add some path additions with a bit more colour and there's already an attraction behind Dondervogel which is way more colourful, so I don't think it will be a problem in the end.

    @Cena: I rather like the station of Dondervogel myself. I know it's simple, but that's on purpose. I used Kumba's roof for the little building, because that object got no sides and the roof seems lighter that way. With a full roof like the main station, the building seemed too top-heavy.

    @Liampie: I agree with most of your comments. I know how to spell Dondervogel, but it wouldn't fit on the sign otherwise :) I know you can ZC two signs together to make a longer one, but I couldn't find a configuration in which showed right and didn't glitch from both sides, so I thought this was the best option. The entrance could indeed be more prominent, I'll have a look at it. A clock for the station already came to my mind, but I didn't find a good combination of objects for it. I'll also have another look at that idea.
  • Corey%s's Photo
    I saw the first screen, and new that every single screen after it would be amazing. I was right.
  • Flap%s's Photo
    I'm Fan!
  • Dimi%s's Photo
    Classic Guide style, I love it.
  • J K%s's Photo
    Love it all.
  • Infest%s's Photo
    Beautiful and very realistic! :)

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