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whole screen is great.

I agree about great architecture and not so nice path choice. I'd go for something that mimics asian wooden paths.

Thanks for all your comments!
The path is not good i know but what kind of path should i take? My favorite canidate is brick path.
And the architecture. I think prodigy's opinion is right. So i would make the chinese area complete new.

Greets Jonny93

The path is not good i know but what kind of path should i take? My favorite canidate is brick path. And the architecture. I think prodigy's opinion is right. So i would make the chinese area complete new.

You should try some unorthodox objects to make the area really your own. It's quite generic as of now. Here's a suggestions for the path and how to make it more interesting with irregular whafs and stuff.

I thought pink flowers would look good in combination with more sober architecture. Ignore the execution, I cought this up in five minutes.



Looks more authentic, and not really because my architecture is accurate because it isn't. It's just sober and minimal. Your version was over the top. Just a personal preference though.

In short, use cobble stones and wharfs.

Thanks Liampie for this good tip. I hope i can realise that.
But at the moment i have no ideas for the chinese area so i worked at the middle ages area:


Greets Jonny93

It all looks great. Not sure about the mine train, too much hill. Needs more foilage and architecture I guess.

That's my favourite screen I've seen here over the last couple of months... fantastic!

I really hate that tea-cup custom ride.

Other than that, awesome as always

this screen i really enjoy, great work!

Great work

Really nice screen, but I don't love the teacups. The roof is just ugly. Perhaps a steep roof like the building on the left? But the rest is fantastic!

Thanks for your critics!
I changed the roof of the teacup ride and expanded the buildings of the area:


Greets Jonny93

Dude I love you!

really awesome work here
-JDP

I really love that building on the right. Everything else is cool too.

The only major problem in your park is that the planters are WAY too big, but that has been said lots of times before so do whatever you want.

@Liampie: Thanks for the permission to do what i want.
I built a castle in the Area with a new Coaster. Its not complete ready but i want to show something new:


Greets Jonny93

stunning.

that monorail turn and drop is ugly and ruins the screen, but the structure is very nice. nice use of textures.

That's a brilliant screen but

that monorail turn and drop is ugly and ruins the screen

Middle age section is beautiful, nice details, like the Castle gate butt remove the monorail a railroad around the castle will be better, in my eyes