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Tip 1. Keep your monorail flat. Aka, on the same height level the entire time, RCT doesn't support good monorail constructions other than flat ones.

that monorail turn and drop is ugly and ruins the screen

exactly, why do people but hills on monorails and trains? fucking stupid

either way man, easily the best project alive around here so thanks for that
-JDP

although the outside of the gate is bare like it might be in real life, at a themepark I would expect the outside to be more themed and inviting. so maybe put some buildings or foliage or something along the outside to make it more inviting. also what other people said about the monorail changing elevation. also the path seems a bit tight against that wall in the top of the screen, I'd suggest moving that back and putting in some more buildings on the inside.

Thanks for all your comments!
I have changed the ugly turn and drop of the monorail. Now goes the monorail straight through the castle and turns after with no height changing. I also add some foilage at the bridge:

Another Picture of the Coaster:

Hope you like the screens.

Greets Jonny93

That's amazing.

I love how you actually listen to the comments !

I'm really excited for this one. That screen of the coaster is stunning, and the castle screen is awesome as well. Excellent job on this.

second screen is one of the best I've seen in a really long time!

That inversion, and the way it interacts with scenery, landscape and foliage, is just
plain awesome. As others have said, it's great you actually listen to the critique
you get, it shows you're a great member in both ways.

Keep it coming.

Beautiful

good shit man, nice work
-JDP

Thanks for your positve reactions! I had a small creative blockade so i hadnt post something new the last time. But now i have new stuff to show. I revised the the mine train. Now it has the name "Rocky Mountain Railway". Here is a picture from the rollercoaster:

Hope you like it!

Greets Jonny93

That screen is good, but not spectacular. I'd say mix in some grey and red rock textures (not the Mars looking one, the smoother red one) and some light brown grass to add some highlights .

The 1/4 landscaping doesnt work at all. It doesnt flow and looks very rectangular. If you manage to give it a better flow you will have a very nice scene.

^ I think it works perfectly for the jagged mine effect he's aiming for; though throw in some more rocks too and it's ace.

Thanks for your critics! I have add some black rocks and i worked a bit at the landscaping and the foilage. Hope this is better then the version before:
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Comments are welcome!

Greets Jonny93

I think it looks very fine. You should move on and finish other parts of the park instead of nitpicking details.

I think it's an improvement worth the effort. Good job. Now move on.

i think that theres no need for the banked turn straight after the lift

Yes, it's sure an improvement. Like Posix said, this is fine, now time to work on other things in the park.