(Archive) Advertising District / Looney Adventure World
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19-March 11
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Kampfgeist Offline
A friendly ''hello'' at all =)
At first, i'm not very good in speaking and writing english, so sorry^^
but i will try it =P
I'm new here but i think some german users know who i am.
So this is my first topic here and i will show you some photos of my project ''Looney Adventure World''.
It's a theme park and the theme areas are:
1.) Mainstreet
2.) Austria
3.) Deep in Africa
4.) Venice (Italy)
Logo:
I have so many photos here on my pc but i will give a few
I will give you some more photos in a few days but look at it =)
Mainstreet:
Venice:
Deep in Africa:
Austria:
See you
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tdub96 Offline
First off, welcome to NE. Second of all, very nice batch of screens. Thirdly, I don't see how country/city based themed areas will fit in an overall Looney Toons-park but it sure does look great right now. -
posix Offline
Don't you just have to love fresh German mentality still so full of pride?
(a) Importance of who knows him.
(b) Exclusivity of his own skill by mentioning how many screens he will allow us to see.
Kampfgeist, sorry it took us so long to approve your account. We had some issues with a wave of spam accounts which made us stop approving new ones altogether for a while. Thankfully, geehwzz has fixed it, so let me welcome you to the site.
The screens show great promise. You have a tendency to create buildings with relatively big bodies. I like that. Your sense for colour combinations is working well I find, and I especially like how all of the screens have a strong "park vibe".
In your screens you show both very bad and relatively good theming abilities. The beemer's theming is more or less non-existent, which makes the few shrubs and random objects you threw under it totally awkward and unpleasant. The architecture of Austria however shows typical ornaments that you've designed convincingly. Same goes for the African architecture, which is not very clear in its message but somewhere allows to hear a low voice saying "imperial style". That's good.
I look forward to further screens and hopefully submissions from you! -
Cocoa Offline
the screens are very reminiscent of fisch's work but I'll forgive you because they're so nicehowever you don't seem to know what to do outside of architecture. the foliage and land textures under the coaster are awful.
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turbin3 Offline
Welcome Kampfgeist. I remember your name from old rct-world days.
I like the screens. My favourite screen is screen 5, although you have completely copied Fisch's style/buildings, imo you should rebuild them.
The venice screens have a very high quality, well done.
All in all it looks good, but your buildings are too big for my taste / in relation to peeps.
Looking forward to more! -
Fisch Offline
the screens are very reminiscent of fisch's work but I'll forgive you because they're so nice
however you don't seem to know what to do outside of architecture. the foliage and land textures under the coaster are awful.
I was hoping somebody would notice. Because Kampfgeist honestly I still think that your park looks good but I can't really just forget the fact that the African area looks pretty much exactly like something I've built at one point but what is more, there's so much stuff that seems to be copied off of Beagle's Seven Stars Entertainment Park...don't know if any of you guys remember that one? But anyway Kampfgeist we've had this discussion before already. I like this and the Venetian area shows that you can use your own creativity and ideas as well and infact I honestly think that the Venetian area is the best looking one in the park and as far as I know it's not copied either. So for the future just try to find your own style.
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oh and welcome on the forums! I hope you enjoy it here! -
chorkiel Offline
I was really excited when I was looking at the screens because they were really good but then I saw the last one of austria..
those rocks suck! my only complainment. -
BelgianGuy Offline
Where your archy is decent and rather well in details your landscaping and foliage is terrible tbh I think.
I think you'll do good with checking out pictures of how a landscape flows and how the foliage flows with the landscape and such, also the rocks aren't good imo, they don't fit the style of building you displayed in other screens. -
Kampfgeist Offline
Wow, thanks a lot for all your comments and all your ideas for improvement =)
I will try to work on it. The theme areas ''Deep in Africa'' and ''Austria'' aren´t completely at the moment and i worked on them the last weeks. The photo of ''Austria'' isn´t up to dateSo i will give you some more new photos of this area =)
@Fisch: sry for it but the disscusion is 2 years old now. Please forgive me and i hope you can understand that i really wouldn´t rebuild this area.All the buildings have this style in Deep in Africa. But for the future i will try to find my own style like in Venice =)
here they are:
I hope you like it =)
see you!
Kampfgeist -
prodigy Offline
Good to see you're here, Kampfgeist. I still remember you and I still love your work!!! -
Cocoa Offline
I'm having trouble liking these screens... the first one has just way too much going on and the building looks unrealistically tall. there are too many random details like the tan overhang bits. also the foliage is awkward. i dont like the mountain bit either, im not sure what the grey wall bits are and it is too blocky and just a random protrusion from an otherwise flat ground. -
Kampfgeist Offline
okay, but what can i do with the foliage. help me =) i registered me on this page to learn more about rct 2 -
Fisch Offline
The foliage just needs to be less random. Think about how foliage is in real life. In real theme parks there are not just random bushes all over the place.
There are some on the side of the paths and then it's usually really dense foliage but don't mix plants that just don't go together. For this type of foliage it's always nice to combine them with flowers though. I personally like the 1k flowers the best at the moment cause they're so small and don't distract as much from the real themeing. The flowers should always be placed in an astetic way though and give them better looking colors than in the area around the bobsleigh.
Oh and looking at the 4th screen right now, definitely delete the foliage inside that building!
Even though I wouldn't really consider this to be a rollercoaster that's in the Austrian area of your park if I didn't know it was it's still nice and it shows creativity. -
Kampfgeist Offline
Okay, thank you for your comments =)
I will try to rework the foliage.
@Fisch: So you think i have to delete the flowers and give them better colours? and then i only hae to build them near the paths? and the dense foliage around the bobsleigh...oh and i deleted the foliage inside the station
@Cocoa: you never saw tall buildings before? i don't know why it has to be unrealistic
aaaaaaand....i little updtae for you
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