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Update. No idea how to delete the glitch...peeps will arrive soon

place the smoke in exacly the same place as the glitched smoke and just right clic to then rid it. btw nice archy and transfer.

The smoke isn't glitched, I mean the wall of the transfer-house.

thats not possible to remove. i have the same problem

actually have you tried placing the wall on the inside? looks like its on the outside tile.

Walls are on the inside. Btw there's a edit button

Place objects on the outside. Invisible wall would be useful here...

If you ZC in the brown trim along the roof line like you have in the other portions, it should fix it the glitch

Looks good though

Honestly, I don't think the wall glitch is terribly much of an issue. I think it looks worse with the additional wall placed outside.

Everything else is really pretty. It's nice how you designed a spot for visitors to watch riders hit the final break and having their mind orgasms. Also the flower arrangements before it kinda work for me. This is a difficult thing to design. Good job.

This is looking like your best work yet, Turbin3. Very pretty.

^agreed. This is excellent, and getting better with each screen.

I don't like the ''transition'' between stone and wood at the left-building of the screen.

I don't like the ''transition'' between stone and wood at the left-building of the screen.

agreed. i also dont like how the building seems just to be sliced. i sugest making the roof go all the way around.

Yes this is one of my favourite screens from you, good to see after what appeared to me to be a dip in form for you:)

agreed. i also dont like how the building seems just to be sliced. i sugest making the roof go all the way around.

no, I love that slicing :c
keep the slicing ditch the transition or use something to cover the sudden transition c:

Thanks for all the feedback guys, I love you all

I suggest losing the umbrella's and having an awning of some sorts over the tables, you can have an outside sitting area somewhere else since I don't really think it fits in this particualr screen.

I agree with posix, it's a very well composed area.

I still have some issues though... The same as always: slightly random/generic colours and textures, too high arcades. I also think the line of flowers look better if wider and with the sand texture under the coaster being changed to grass.

Fun stuff!

The slice look could be redone with a high roof for the eating area/2nd story eating area or just a roof for the eating area connecting to the next building or held up with a similar(to the original building) columns things-a-ma-jig