(Archive) Advertising District / Elitch Gardens

Wow!

This... This is fantastic!

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it's really good, but there is still room for some fine-tuning

I agree with Geewhzz.

damn it, another competitors of custom flat!
haha. thats fucking cool, I adore that.

It does look nice, are each of those pods individual custom scenery pieces or are they grouped together as a large one? One thing I don't like about it is how the ride's area isn't rotationally symmetric around it's center; I know this arises from the diagonal monorail track being longer than the regular one, but if anything I think the area should be expanded. The best way for this would be to add one more diagonal quartertile fence to each side of the current diagonal fences by the red and purple sets of pods, and then make the diagonal fences closer to the orange pod mimic those. I think that this solution is a good compromise between making the area more circular while not forcing you to modify the surroundings too much. I also think that with the scenery currently available, the structure of the pod assemblies can be made to be more accurate, here's a good pic:

One more thing is that some of those tables can use umbrellas and/or you can even include one on the queue line like you did for the maintenance stairs on what looks like the Arrow shuttle loop.

Enough has been said about that amazing flatride.
I think you should break up that boring asphalt texture everywhere with more than just tables, I'm talking most about the dark gray asphalt which looks kinda terrible in my eyes.
Maybe even puke or garbage would make it less boring..

The ride itself looks absolutely awesome but the surroundings could use some more refinement and originality.

I don't understand how there could be any complaints, this is just perfect. great work.

Did you read the criticism?