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The screenshot doesn't give enough perspective for a comment that would be of much help to you.

From what I can see, the ending turns on the coaster seem a bit rough depending on the train's speed (which would probably be fairly decent coming out of a corkscrew). Perhaps reworking the end of the layout would be a good idea.

The blue on the roof seems a bit bright, but I can't actually give you much of a review there without seeing more of the area.

The foliage is a bit too basic for my taste.

The loop is placed perfectly though, and I think you should try to get the footers on the path down to just one.

rctfreak2000-Thanks for the tips. I am going to try and adjust the ending of the coaster. As for the blue roof...I think it looks really good as a whole.

dr dirt-Thanks. The foilage is being worked on(it's in the beginning stages). As for the footers I will see what I can do.

rctfreak2000-Thanks for the tips. I am going to try and adjust the ending of the coaster. As for the blue roof...I think it looks really good as a whole.

dr dirt-Thanks. The foilage is being worked on(it's in the beginning stages). As for the footers I will see what I can do.

Good luck

How bout we get rid of the footers floating on the water? Dry out the lake, add completed footers, absolute zero clearance, add water, restore clearance, done.

But as for the layout it seems pretty awkward the way it goes over the water. I would personally ditch that idea.
-JDP

sorry dude, not feeling it. being a landscaping nerd, i am really turned off by your disregard for flow in that aspect. perhaps it's worth investing some time into smoothing the landscape and adjusting the land colourings?
the colours on the coaster just don't suite anything else in the screen. maybe make the track all one colour and the supports all one colour? i get the feeling that would make the screen more engaging. the coaster looks forced, but i won't say anything till I've seen the whole layout. architecture feels bland and uninspired.

i like the fact you're building though. try and get together some clear inspirations to help you build something convincing.

JDP- Personally I think the water section looks great ingame, but hey, to each his own.

SSSammy- No problem. I completely agree with you on that landscape issue. It will be fixed haha. As for the architecture...well I am aiming for a "Hawaiian" relaxed style of architecture. If it's not workin' out lemme know how I should fix it. As for me playing the game, I do play RCT occassionally